Dear Bob,
親愛的鮑勃,
Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in...
昨天我收到了你的來信,我很高興成為你的筆友。我的名字叫張彼德。我今年十六歲,我住在......
I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
我也是一名中學生,我非常喜歡英語和數學。我還喜歡體育運動,我很擅長唱歌。我對美國的了解不多,下次來信時能多跟我聊聊你們國家的事嗎?
Please write to me soon.
期待著你的來信。
Yours
你的
Peter Zhang
張彼德
點評:回信簡潔明了,句子間的銜接自然、緊湊,文中作者把自己的情況大致向美國朋友作了介紹,達到了回信的目的。