六級高分作文_謹慎利弊談

　謹慎利弊談

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the advantages and disadvantages of being cautious by referring to the saying “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what is the best policy for making right decisions . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù) “過度謹慎危害最大”這句話，寫一篇文章，可以舉例說明。

2. 文章立意：謹慎，從一方面來說，能幫助我們避免因沖動作出錯誤決定而造成損失。但從另一方面來說，過度的謹慎也會使我們錯失一些良機。在今天這個高速發(fā)展的社會，機會稍縱即逝，只有那些敢于決斷的人才能把握住機會，獲得成功。

寫作思路

1. 第一段指出任何事物都有兩面性，并圍繞著事物的兩面性來對比說明謹慎的利弊。

2. 第二段通過一個小故事舉例說明過度謹慎的危害。

3. 第三段深化主題，提出做決定的正確方法，即“敢于決斷”。

參考范文

Every coin has two sides. 1 There is no exception to cautiousness. 2 Cautiousness, on one hand, can help us avoid losses brought about by impulsive decisions. On the other hand, too much cautiousness may cost us good opportunities. 3 Therefore, it is believed by some that “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all.” 4

A young man loves his job very much, but after a few years of working, he has a thought of starting a business because of his dissatisfaction with all kinds of restrictions in his job. However, since he had the thought of establishing a business, ten years have passed and he still works in the company. Why? Because each time he tried, he felt that it was not the right time, for example, insufficient funds, sluggish economy, the birth of children... 5 This story told us that being too cautious and being afraid of trying something new may cause serious damage to our achievements. 6

In today’s fast-developing society, opportunities can be fleeting. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success. 7

任何事情都有兩面性，謹慎也不例外。謹慎，從一方面來說，能幫助我們避免因沖動作出錯誤決定而造成損失。但從另一方面來說，過度的謹慎也會使我們錯失良機。因而有人相信，過度謹慎危害最大。

有個年輕人很喜歡他的工作，但是工作幾年后，他對于工作上的種種限制愈發(fā)不滿，因而想創(chuàng)業(yè)。然而，自從他有創(chuàng)業(yè)的想法以來，10年過去了，他依然在原來的公司上班。為什么呢？因為他每次試圖創(chuàng)業(yè)時，總是感覺時機不成熟。例如，資金不足，經(jīng)濟不景氣，新嬰兒的誕生……這個故事告訴我們，過于慎重而不敢嘗試新的事物，會對我們的成就造成嚴重的傷害。

在今天這個高速發(fā)展的社會，機會稍縱即逝，只有那些敢于決斷的人才能把握住機會，獲得成功。

范文點評

1. 開篇用一句成語引入，從正反兩面進行分析說明。

2. 通過該句，自然過渡到謹慎利弊談。

3. 通過正反說明謹慎利弊，對二者進行了對比。

4. 引用名言作第一段結尾，同時也點明了文章論點。

5. 文章主題段通過一個小故事舉例說明過度謹慎的危害。

6. 點明小故事的寓意，進一步強化了實例對主題的論證。

7. 將整篇文章主題凝縮，通過一句話加以總結，同時解答了做決定的正確方法。

要點用法

cautiousness n. 謹慎；小心

avoid v. 避免；躲避

bring about 引起；導致

impulsive adj. 沖動的；受感情驅使的

sluggish adj. 蕭條的

achievement n. 成就

fleeting adj. 稍縱即逝的

句法點評

1. Every coin has two sides.

這是一句英語成語，表示“凡事都有兩面性”。

2. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success.