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感謝公司的賞識,表示愿意接受工作邀請,對未來工作的期待
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提條件——不要被飄飄欲仙的幸福感沖昏了頭,這個時候是自己提條件的最好時機,否則就要等到很久以后了。DB公司投入了大量時間尋找合適的人才,一旦他們發(fā)出工作邀請,他們希望對方會接受。對于拉拉這個步入職場不久的年輕人來說,提的條件不應(yīng)拘泥于金錢,而是學(xué)習(xí)和發(fā)展的機會。
強調(diào)自己和職位很相稱(match)——這是與新雇主建立親近關(guān)系(bonding)的開端,招聘經(jīng)理李文華努力為DB公司找到拉拉來擔(dān)任銷售助理一職,如果拉拉適合這個崗位,說明招聘經(jīng)理的工作是出色的。如果拉拉不適合這個崗位,她拍拍屁股走人了,倒是輕松;但是對招聘經(jīng)理會造成不小的、長久的負面影響,他需要重新招人,他本年度的工作業(yè)績報告也會很不好看。所以拉拉在這封郵件里,需要強調(diào)自己和這個職位非常相稱,算是給公司、給招聘經(jīng)理一顆定心丸。
To: Wenhua Li
Cc: Rose
From: Lala Du
Subject: Accepting Job Offer
Dear Mr. Li,
I was delighted to receive your job offer. I am pleased to accept your offer of the position of Sales Assistant for Southern China area at DB.
Being a part of DB has been my goal from the beginning. I am so looking forward to tracking, investigating, and reporting sales information for the twelve sales managers in Southern China.
After checking out on the literature you sent over, I did not find the information of training/mentoring system and career advancement opportunities at DB. Would you mind explaining them to me a little bit?
I believe this will be a mutually rewarding and long-lasting relationship. Thank you again for acknowledging my skills and experiences. It will be a great match!