閱卷老師也有審美疲勞的時(shí)候,所以寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候要長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,不要一直運(yùn)用長(zhǎng)句,這樣也會(huì)增加有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。也不要一直用短句,這樣會(huì)顯得文章太過(guò)膚淺簡(jiǎn)單。有時(shí)候?qū)懸粋€(gè)簡(jiǎn)單但是精辟的小句子,可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛,揭示主題,總結(jié)全文和聯(lián)系上下文的作用。
You may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind.
你也許已走出我的視線,但從未走出我的思念。
Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.
任何值得做的,就把它做好。
The hard part isn’t making the decision. It’s living with it.
做出決定并不困難,困難的是接受決定。
It’s better to be alone than to be with someone you’re not happy to be with.
寧愿一個(gè)人呆著,也不要跟不合拍的人呆一塊。
強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章開(kāi)頭 用一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句和一個(gè)短句。在文章主題部分,要先用一個(gè)短句,然后再用長(zhǎng)句。采取短句長(zhǎng)句相結(jié)合的原則來(lái)組織文章。文章結(jié)尾一班用一個(gè)短句一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句就可以了。
方法二:主題句
文章要有一個(gè)主題,就必定要有一個(gè)主題句,沒(méi)有主題句的文章,或者主題句是隱藏在文章里面的文章會(huì)讓人讀完之后有一種云里霧里的感覺(jué)。所以文章的開(kāi)頭或者結(jié)尾一定要有一個(gè)主題句,讓讀者一目了然,這樣是最保險(xiǎn)的拿高分方法。
At the very beginning,you must work hard at your study and be fully prepared before the test and examination. (主題句)Without enough preparation,you can hardly get good grades.
To start with,you should exercise everyday and control your diet if you really want to lose weight.(主題句)Without enough exercise,you cannot lose weight healthily.
Since my idea of arts festival integrates training students’ artistic ability with improving their aesthetic taste,I believe it will go a long way in art education,which is also the ultimate aim of university arts festival.(主題句)
To keep ourselves alive,we need all kinds of nutrition.Eating is the most important way by which we can get starch,protein,vitamin,sugar,fat,and some trave elements.(主題句)
People often ask me whether I find students in China very different from those I have taught for the past 25 years in Australia and what the differences are. (主題句)
強(qiáng)烈建議:主題句一定要寫(xiě)在文章的開(kāi)頭或者結(jié)尾比較明顯的位置,比如第一句或者最后一句。一定不要將主題句隱藏在文章最中間不顯眼的地方。
方法三:一二三
不管是領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話的時(shí)候,還是滔滔不絕的辯手在臺(tái)上指點(diǎn)江山、激揚(yáng)文字的時(shí)候,我們都能看到他們講話都是有一定的條理性的。他們總是說(shuō)第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一部分、第二部分.......或者The first argument,the second argument,the third argument,the last argument.
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,膚淺)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,膚淺)
3)to start with, next, in addition, finally(推薦)
4)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(推薦)
5)for one thing, for another thing(適用于只有兩點(diǎn)的情況)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(推薦)
7)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于只有兩點(diǎn)的情況)
強(qiáng)烈建議:為了是文章看起來(lái)更加清晰有條理,方便閱卷老師在閱讀完這么多份答卷之后,看到你的文章時(shí),能夠快速的找到你所要表達(dá)和論證的論點(diǎn),實(shí)用這些連詞是相當(dāng)有必要的。這些連詞和轉(zhuǎn)折詞的使用也有利于你了解自己整篇文章的框架,讓自己在寫(xiě)文章的時(shí)候更加清晰,更有利于你的現(xiàn)場(chǎng)發(fā)揮。
方法四:短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先
寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)有兩大好處,當(dāng)閱卷老師看到你用的短語(yǔ)比較高級(jí),甚至有閱卷老師自己都不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ)是,他們自然會(huì)對(duì)你的卷子產(chǎn)生好感,如果你用的短語(yǔ)全部都是最簡(jiǎn)單最基礎(chǔ)的,那么閱卷老師自然不會(huì)把你的作文太當(dāng)回事,自然不會(huì)給你高分。如果你的作文中有亮點(diǎn)和精彩的短語(yǔ)出現(xiàn),那么你的文章一定會(huì)得高分。關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用還可以為你的作文加不少字?jǐn)?shù)。比如:
I want that.
短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking to that.
It is nothing to do with you.
短語(yǔ)表達(dá):It is none of your business.
I find you.
短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking for you.
To join in the activity
短語(yǔ)表達(dá):To participate in the activity / To get involved in the activity
To solve the problem
短語(yǔ)表達(dá):To deal with the problem
強(qiáng)烈推薦:高級(jí)短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用可以為你的文章增色不少哦,正如在平時(shí)交流中,如果你只會(huì)實(shí)用一些最基礎(chǔ)最簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯和短語(yǔ),那么別人一聽(tīng)就知道你的英語(yǔ)水平很低。但是如果你不時(shí)的蹦出幾個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯,高級(jí)短語(yǔ)的話,那么你的英語(yǔ)水平自然而然的就會(huì)現(xiàn)樓出來(lái),就會(huì)得到別人的青睞。