話題八：校園生活與活動 Writing 1 高考英語高分范文2

Writing 1 　［2014年高考上海卷 ］學(xué)校英語報正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個，并從三個備選欄目（時尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個納入該報。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；

2．你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。

高分范文2

Dear Editor，

It is said that our school English newspaper is taking some changes into consideration．As a loyal reader，I'm writing to you sincerely to suggest the entertainment section be canceled and the profession planning section be added．

Among the three sections of health，entertainment and culture，I enjoy the second one least．There is no denying that relaxing is to certain extent essential in addition to our students' busy study，yet the entertainment section tends to be filled with meaningless gossips or the latest development of video games，thus failing to lead to the good results which were expected at first．Students' concentration may well be distracted instead．But the health section and the culture section serve as well，offering considerate tips of keeping fit or relieving stress and broadening our horizons respectively．

To replace the entertainment section，I recommend the profession planning section，which is definitely suitable for high school students，especially us senior three students．A good plan for the future profession has great impacts on one's whole life，of which the choice of college and major is an important part．I am sure the section is of essence for it can provide various information of different professions as well as useful advice for the students who have their own unique personalities．

I believe that to choose the section of profession planning as a substitute for the entertainment section will undoubtedly make our paper more welcome，and I wish my voice could be heard．

Yours sincerely，

Cheng Fei