六級高分作文_令你印象最深刻的一部電影
令你印象最深刻的一部電影
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a movie that impressed you most . You should state the reasons and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生描述令自己印象最深刻的一部電影。
2. 文章立意：看電影已經(jīng)成為很普及的一種娛樂消遣，也是一種流行的文化。相信人人都曾看過電影，而且總會(huì)有一部電影給自己留下最為深刻的印象，簡單介紹一下這部電影，說明一下這部電影為什么令你印象最為深刻。
寫作思路
1. 第一段開宗明義，點(diǎn)明令自己印象最為深刻的電影是哪一部。
2. 第二段詳細(xì)介紹該電影，從自己關(guān)注的角度，闡述該電影令人印象深刻之處。
3. 第三段總結(jié)全文，講述電影傳達(dá)的人生意義。
參考范文
Forrest Gump is the movie that impressed me most. The hero, Mr. Gump, has a low IQ but a rich mind. His deeds encouraged and inspired numerous people around the world. 1
The deepest impression that the movie left me with is that Mr. Gump just kept running all the time. It seemed that, through running, Mr. Gump went to the university, was invited to the White House and even travelled throughout the whole nation. 2 Sometimes I wonder if we all misunderstand the true meaning of being smart and clever, for Mr. Gump has taught us a very different lesson. No one could imagine that a man who is regarded as “stupid” can do so many amazing things. 3
From my point of view, kindness and simplicity are the cleverest gift that God has given us. 4 Mr. Gump’s success is no accident. There is no doubt that through perseverance, ordinary people like you and me can succeed in our life. 5
《阿甘正傳》是令我印象最深刻的電影。男主角阿甘雖然智商低，但思想?yún)s很富有。他的事跡鼓舞和激發(fā)了全世界無以數(shù)計(jì)的人。
電影給我印象最深刻的是阿甘一直在奔跑。通過奔跑，阿甘似乎跑進(jìn)了大學(xué)，跑進(jìn)了白宮，甚至跑遍了整個(gè)國家。有時(shí)候,我甚至懷疑是不是我們所有人都誤解了聰明睿智的真正含義，因?yàn)榘⒏式o我們上了一堂截然不同的課。沒有人能想到，一個(gè)被認(rèn)為是“白癡”的人，竟然能完成如此多的壯舉。
依我看來，善良和單純是上帝給我們的最智慧的財(cái)富。阿甘的成功并不是意外。毫無疑問，像你我這樣的普通人，通過自身的堅(jiān)持，也能在生活中獲得成功。
范文點(diǎn)評
1. 開門見山，表明《阿甘正傳》是令自己印象最深刻的電影，并簡單評價(jià)阿甘這一人物形象。
2. 說明電影中讓自己印象最深刻之處：阿甘的奔跑。
3. 進(jìn)一步評論阿甘這一人物：“白癡”卻有大成就，讓人深思。
4. 發(fā)表自己的看法：善良和單純是上帝給予我們的最智慧的財(cái)富。
5. 深化主題：我們普通人也可以像阿甘那樣獲得成功。
要點(diǎn)用法
hero n. 男主角
IQ(intelligence quotient) 智商
misunderstand v. 誤解
amazing adj. 令人驚異的
unexpected adj. 意外的，意想不到的
simplicity n. 樸素，單純
perseverance n. 堅(jiān)持不懈，毅力
句法點(diǎn)評
1. The deepest impression that the movie left me with is that Mr. Gump just kept running all the time.
本句中，第一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾限定先行詞the deepest impression，該定語從句中有l(wèi)eave sb. with an impression這一結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“給某人留下印象”；第二個(gè)that引導(dǎo)表語從句。
2. There is no doubt that through perseverance, ordinary people like you and me can succeed in our life.
本句為There is no doubt that...句型，意為“無疑，……”，其中that 引導(dǎo)同位語從句，說明doubt的具體內(nèi)容。又如：There is no doubt that Mary is qualified for the job. 毫無疑問，瑪麗有資格做這項(xiàng)工作。
