六級高分作文_困難面前方顯其能

　困難面前方顯其能

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing difficulties by commenting on the saying, “It is difficulties that show what men are .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)引言的內(nèi)容就“面對困難”這一話題展開論述。

2. 文章立意：每一個人在前進道路上都難以繞開困難，有的迎難而上，最終克服困難成為強者；有的畏難而退，最后敗下陣來而成為輸家。因此，如何面對困難很重要，不要懼怕困難。

寫作思路

1. 第一段引入引語并解釋其含義，然后提出面對困難的話題。

2. 第二段描述面對困難時的各種不同的態(tài)度，為如何面對困難做好鋪墊。

3. 第三段闡述如何面對困難。

參考范文

“It is difficulties that show what men are.” The saying, which means that only difficulties can reveal one’s true colors, seems to remind everyone not to be afraid of difficulties. 1

As is known to us all, everyone will come across various difficulties or even get into trouble in their life. However, when facing difficulties, different people have different attitudes. Some feel discouraged and draw back while others rise up to them and fight bravely. Some embrace difficulties with optimism while others escape from reality and never rise above the hardships. 2 How can we face difficulties properly? In my opinion, the following approaches can help you tide over them smoothly. 3

In the first place, 4 keep positive and optimistic, which can help you go through any tough period of your life. Secondly, 4 embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances. Thirdly, 4 never lose heart and surrender to whatever befalls, which can help you learn from your defeat and improve your ability to take a turn for the better. 4

“是困難讓我們看到真正的自己”。這句話意味著只有困難才能夠展示一個人的本色。它似乎也提醒著每個人都不要害怕困難。

眾所周知，每個人都會遇到各式各樣的困難，甚至在生活中陷入困境。然而，面對困難，不同的人會有不同的態(tài)度。一些人氣餒并退縮了，而另外一些人會挺身而出并勇敢地與之抗爭。一些人會樂觀地接受，而另外一些人則會逃避現(xiàn)實并且無法從困苦中走出。如何能正確地面對困難？在我看來，如下幾種方法可以幫你順利渡過難關。

首先，應保持積極和樂觀的心態(tài)，這能夠幫你挺過人生中任何困難的時期。第二，像接受禮物一樣接受困難，而不是去逃避，這可以使你不管在困境還是順境中都能欣賞人生。第三，永遠不要失去信心。不論發(fā)生什么都不要放棄，這可以幫助你從失敗中吸取教訓，提升自我，將逆境轉(zhuǎn)化成順境。

范文點評

1. 開篇引入引言，并簡單加以解釋，從而點出論點：不要懼怕困難。

2. 采用排比兼對比論述的方式闡明對待困難的各種不同態(tài)度。

3. 自然過渡，提出如何正確面對困難，渡過難關。

4. 分三個層次論證了如何面對困難，條理清楚。

要點用法

true colors 真面目

discouraged adj. 氣餒的

rise up to 反抗

approach n. 方法；途徑

tide over 渡過（難關、危機）

tough period 艱難時期

adversity n. 逆境；不幸

befall v. 降臨；發(fā)生

handicap n. 不利條件；障礙

favorable adj. 有利的

句法點評

1. It is difficulties that show what men are.

本句采用的是強調(diào)句式，即：It is+被強調(diào)部分+that+其他。另外，本句中what men are是賓語從句，作show的賓語。

2. Secondly, embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances.