六級(jí)高分作文_驕兵必?cái)?/h1>

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Pride Goes Before a Fall . You can explain how you understand the saying by citing examples. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生就“驕兵必?cái)　边@一話題進(jìn)行闡述。

2. 文章立意：謙虛使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后。

寫(xiě)作思路

1. 開(kāi)篇引入諺語(yǔ)“驕兵必?cái)　?，加以?jiǎn)單評(píng)述，并指出可以從三個(gè)方面證明。

2. 第二段從三個(gè)方面論述驕兵必?cái)〉挠^點(diǎn)。

3. 第三段再次強(qiáng)調(diào)驕傲的害處，重申觀點(diǎn)。

參考范文

Pride Goes Before a Fall

“Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are familiar. 1 I fully agree with it. For me, this saying can be proved from three aspects. 2

First of all 3 , if you indulge yourself in the past glory and are too proud of your success, you will overestimate your competence, which prevents you from making progress. As a result, you may neglect the potential crisis and end up in failure. Furthermore 3 , every one of us cherishes a fantastic dream in our heart—the ultimate goal of our life. If we want to make our dream come true or realize the final goal, we should never stop the pursuit of it. Lastly 3 , great men in history are always modest. Their tolerance and openness have been proved vital to their success.

Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind. Knowing that there is still room for improvement, we will keep making progress and perfecting ourselves. 4

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“驕兵必?cái)　笔且痪湮覀兌际煜さ脑?。我完全贊同這種說(shuō)法。我認(rèn)為,這句話可以從三個(gè)方面來(lái)證明。

首先，如果你沉浸在過(guò)去的榮耀中并且對(duì)自己的成功過(guò)于驕傲，你就會(huì)高估自己的能力，這就會(huì)阻止你進(jìn)步。結(jié)果，你可能會(huì)忽視潛在的危機(jī)并最終失敗。此外，我們每個(gè)人在心底都有一個(gè)美好的夢(mèng)想——我們終極的生活目標(biāo)。如果我們想實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想或者完成終極目標(biāo)，我們就永遠(yuǎn)不能停止對(duì)它的追求。最后，歷史上的偉人通常是謙遜的。他們的寬容和開(kāi)明對(duì)他們的成功而言是十分重要的。

謙虛使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后。知道自己仍然有進(jìn)步的空間，我們就會(huì)不斷進(jìn)步并完善自己。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 開(kāi)篇引入諺語(yǔ)，指出該諺語(yǔ)廣為人知。

2. 自然過(guò)渡，表明自己贊同諺語(yǔ)的說(shuō)法，并指出可以從三個(gè)方面證明諺語(yǔ)的觀點(diǎn)。

3. 分三個(gè)層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，條理清晰，論證有力。first of all, furthermore, lastly分別相當(dāng)于firstly, secondly, thirdly，表示論述的先后順序，應(yīng)多注意積累同義表達(dá)，以避免俗套和語(yǔ)言的貧乏。

4. 重申觀點(diǎn)，指出謙虛方知有進(jìn)步的空間。

要點(diǎn)用法

indulge oneself in 沉溺于

be proud of 以……為驕傲/自豪

overestimate v. 估計(jì)過(guò)高

competence n. 能力；勝任

come true 實(shí)現(xiàn)

conceit n. 驕傲，自負(fù)

lag behind 落后；滯后

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. “Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are very familiar.

此處用到了“with+which”引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前面的proverb，with來(lái)自于短語(yǔ)be familiar with。

2. Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind.

本句對(duì)應(yīng)中文“謙虛使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后”，連詞while表示前后對(duì)比，常譯作“而”，此處對(duì)應(yīng)的中文譯文前后兩個(gè)分句暗含了對(duì)比、對(duì)照的意思。