例句：
In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learnknowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.
改句：
In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasingly important for people toacquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.
【解析】
首先我們看到原句中出現(xiàn)了more and more，在四六級作文中，它可算是?？?，對閱卷老師而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危險哦，所以在我們把它用一個簡單的副詞來替代，副詞修飾形容詞，相信會令人感覺眼前一亮。
其次，我們還要注意一個搭配問題，原句中的learn knowledge是明顯的中式英語，很多同學(xué)會誤用，正確的搭配應(yīng)該是acquire knowledge。
最后，我們有余力可以把句子通過從句進行相連，使句子看起來更有結(jié)構(gòu)感。
下面大家一起來試試吧！
1.China is developing very fast in recent years.
答案：
China is highly developed in recent years.
