?This summer, the hottest movie must belong to the Jurassic Park. The series of Jurassic Park is very popular around the world. When I saw the first part, I was very impressed by the dinosaur’s world. The director was so talented that he made use of the computer technology to show people an amazing world. The audience could see all kinds of dinosaurs in the movie and learned something about these huge animals. In the movie, people and these big animals can’t live together, because human being always wants to hurt them and make the profit. So there is war, the dinosaurs eat people and people try to kill them. It is time for human being to think about what they should do to the nature.

譯文：這個夏天，最熱門的電影當(dāng)屬于《侏羅紀(jì)公園》，這個電影的系列在全世界都很受歡迎。當(dāng)我看第一部的時候，對恐龍的世界留下了很深刻的印象。導(dǎo)演很聰明，充分利用了電腦技術(shù)，給人們展示了一個神奇的世界。觀眾能夠在電影中看到各種各樣的恐龍，也學(xué)到了關(guān)于這些巨大動物的知識。在電影中，人們和這些動物無法共存，因為人類總想要傷害它們，獲取利益。因此總是存在戰(zhàn)爭，恐龍吃人，人想要殺掉恐龍。人類該是時候思考下他們應(yīng)該對大自然做些什么。

小編點評:這是一篇不錯的英語作文!里面應(yīng)用了過去時態(tài)和現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，同時還使用了時間狀語從句when的表達(dá)~小編覺得里面有些單詞、詞組是不錯的，特地整理下來，供大家學(xué)習(xí)~

注釋：

1.belong to.屬于

例句：He did not belong to his set of friends.

他與他那伙朋友不一樣.

2.Be impressed by 對...印象深刻

例句：Gorbachev could not help but be impressed by China's successes in international markets.

戈爾巴喬夫也禁不住被中國在世界市場上的成功深深震撼.

3.talented.adj.有才能的，有才干的

例句：He was not only talented but immensely popular with his colleagues.

他不僅才華橫溢，而且深受同事的喜愛。
4. make profit 獲利，賺錢

例句：They are set to make a big fat profit.

他們下定決心要大賺一筆。