雅思大作文語料庫：寄宿學校的利弊

It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than live at home with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 孩子們應在大學學習，而不是在家里和父母住，是否認同?

= Nowadays, sending children to a boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. Why is this case? Do you think it is a positive development? 寄宿學校的原因以及利弊討論?

寄宿學校的原因：

1. 保障學習的學生們應該住在大學連續(xù)性，尤其是對于父母工作需要不斷遷移的學生而言。

2. 父母有意識地培養(yǎng)孩子們的群體性成長經(jīng)驗。

寄宿學校的利好：

1. 孩子們可以通過住校鍛煉獨立性， 比如自己學會了洗衣服，整理房間， 處理學習中的問題，這些能力的培養(yǎng)對于人的成長是有利好的。

2. 可以培養(yǎng)同學間的友誼，收獲更多的快樂。并且，使人學習如何與人交往和交流。

3. 可以更好地利用學校的資源，例如圖書館，食堂，健身館。有良好學習氛圍。

寄宿學校的弊端：

1. 寄宿生可能受到周圍不良同學的影響，染上吸煙以及打游戲的惡習。

2. 寄宿生和父母的感情可能會疏遠。

老師原創(chuàng)語料庫：

1. boarding school = school with accommodation n 寄宿學校

2. save the trouble of commuting between home and school v節(jié)省了從學校到家里的往返的麻煩

點評：同理寫作遠程教育，遠程辦公

3. ensure the continuity of academic study v保障了學習的連續(xù)性

4. are able to improve their independence via living on campus v通過住校提高獨立性

5. train one’s sense of independence = foster one’s sense of independence v培養(yǎng)獨立性

6. cultivate many skills such as tidying up room，doing the laundry v培養(yǎng)各種能力，例如整理房間，洗衣服

7. have more time to dive into various campus activities v參加校園活動

8. It is convenient to draw on various educational resources v利用各種教育資源

點評：draw on v 利用……

點評：本句同理寫作課堂教育的利好

9. The choice of hostel accommodation， organized by the university, would enable you to mix with a lot of new people v結(jié)實新朋友(注意插入語使用)

10. enlarge one’s circle of friends v擴大交友圈

11. …… make it easier for you to make new social contacts: v結(jié)實好友

12. University accommodation often provides some form of catering facilities, students do not have to do their own shopping or cooking 學校提供餐飲，學生不必購物，做飯

點評：catering facilities n 餐飲

13. …… may be easily swayed by surroundings without sufficient supervision and guidance from their parents 沒有父母的監(jiān)管，也許受到周圍不良環(huán)境的影響。

14. It is wise send children to a school with commendations 送孩子們讀寄宿學校是明智的。

15. The merits of encouraging students to study in schools with accommodation outweigh its possible drawbacks. 鼓勵孩子們讀寄宿學校，利大于弊。