寫(xiě)作中易被忽略的小錯(cuò)誤

關(guān)于寫(xiě)作相信大家都買了不少參考書(shū)，并且背誦了不少好段子，但是有的同學(xué)的作文分?jǐn)?shù)依然不理想，究其原因在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可能不太在意，大家要引以為戒，無(wú)則加勉。

1. 結(jié)構(gòu)不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score bystudying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來(lái)的時(shí)候，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語(yǔ)。

2. 不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

3. 段落過(guò)長(zhǎng)，不分段主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題：She are a good friend of mine that I has known fora long time.主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一致。

4. 句子別扭：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the containerchanged.措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。

5. 在正式的寫(xiě)作中不要使用縮寫(xiě)形式，如：can't，don't，it's，we'll，they've等等，而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞的完整理式can not，do not，it is，we will，they have等等。

6. 關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù)：Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my testscores.不能在該句的主要主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。

7. 句子不完整：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. Forexample, my friend in high school.句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或動(dòng)詞，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)。

8. 用詞欠妥： When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過(guò)于含糊，不適合用在正式的場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞，如become, receive,find, achieve,等等。

9. 信息不正確：I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.傳的信息不正確，或者讓人聽(tīng)起來(lái)覺(jué)得可能不正確(如果確實(shí)是正確的，應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣，因?yàn)樽x者不認(rèn)為是正確的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我們不能絕對(duì)地說(shuō)每一件新東西都是從美國(guó)誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn)，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most。非英語(yǔ)單詞Computers are very helpfuland advantageable。盡管看起來(lái)象個(gè)單詞，其實(shí)不是，至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式。

10. 介詞多余：I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about tome during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to theUS, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about herhusband.在表示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見(jiàn)于downtown，home，there，here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。

11. 跑題或不相關(guān)：There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car。這個(gè)意思與okayfor children to fail sometimes。所表達(dá)的意思很普通大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒(méi)有必要再說(shuō)出來(lái)。

12. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)問(wèn)題：I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want tobecome a vet.這是一個(gè)非常普遍的問(wèn)題!許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫(xiě)的時(shí)候。

13. 重復(fù)冗余：Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要。

14. 單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)：Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths。單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

15. 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題：I want to buy something for my mother that she willlike it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題，缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)，或者這些成分重復(fù)。

16. 語(yǔ)氣與文章不符：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I haveheard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and HongKong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。

17. 代詞指代不明：If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance ofmiscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have goodprograms there.代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。

18. 過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)：We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過(guò)于籠統(tǒng)，不能提供多少信息。

19. 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等。

20. 選詞不恰當(dāng)：I was late getting home because I lost my way.在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞可選擇更好的詞語(yǔ)或者所使用的詞語(yǔ)與文章的總體語(yǔ)氣不符。

21. 單詞形式不當(dāng)：I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的單詞的形式不正確檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。