托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：require students to wear school uniforms

　　Should high schools require students to wear school uniforms or permit them to decide what to wear to school?

　　Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這個(gè)話題相信中國(guó)考生應(yīng)該是比較能感同身受的，畢竟大部分中小學(xué)的校服在審美上往往都是比較讓人一言難盡的。從好處上來(lái)說(shuō)穿校服便于統(tǒng)一管理，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的紀(jì)律性，避免攀比等等，從壞處上說(shuō)校服難看缺乏個(gè)性不利于學(xué)生自由發(fā)展和培養(yǎng)審美也都可以說(shuō)，總之可以說(shuō)的點(diǎn)還是很多的。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　While in most present day high schools it is controversial that whether students should wear uniforms, most elementary schools have adopted uniform policy with wide support. Uniforms serve students benefits in several ways. First of all, uniforms act as social equalizers. Children often feel less social pressure when everyone in the school dresses the same way. Students who can not be fashionable due to limited family finances are made to feel more comfortable among their peers. Moreover, the wearing of uniforms influences students' perceptions of school climate. Students are made to feel as if they are a part of a team by wearing a uniform. School climate is improved considerably because kids perceive that they fit in because they look like everybody else. In addition, school uniforms would assist students and parents in other ways. Students would learn to appreciate the elimination of so many choices when getting dressed for a school day. Students would not be tardy for school as often because of the indecision about what to wear in the mornings. However, when the issue comes to high school situation, further details should be carefully examined. Students in high schools are in a much different situation from students in elementary schools. High school students are sometimes called young adults, by which people are expecting their maturity, at least to some extent. It's moderate that schools are expected to operate a well-disciplined, structured environment that is conducive to learning. But uniform is not the right answer to various difficulties and problems that the high school education is confronting. For example, while proponents address the safety that uniform policy would bring, opponents are aware of the fact that campus violence would not be reduced because of uniforms. Having grown up already, most students no longer feel that uniforms help them become a part of the school. Furthermore, uniforms may not save parents as much money as many people would like to believe. Uniforms do not eliminate the need for clothing needed for outside school. Students many times don't wear their school clothing the rest of the day once they are out of school. Sneakers, jackets, boots, casual clothing, and more will still be needed. What may first appear to be economical may not be accurate in reality. It has been said that a controversy can not exist without a fundamental dispute, and it seems that the answer to the school uniform debate is not a simple yes or no. There is no clear consensus as to the benefits of school uniforms. However, as to high schools, uniform policy should eventually be reconsidered as many other regulations which have already been eliminated including "Boys' hair should not touch collar," or "Girls' skirts must be longer than knees."