托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：should pets be treated as family members

　　Should pets be treated as family members?

　　Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　最近這些年國(guó)內(nèi)養(yǎng)寵物的人越來(lái)越多，關(guān)于寵物的爭(zhēng)議話題也變得越來(lái)越熱門(mén)。這道題目其實(shí)就是對(duì)這個(gè)話題的討論，而是否認(rèn)可把寵物當(dāng)成家人相信大家應(yīng)該都有不少點(diǎn)可以展開(kāi)。而且兩個(gè)選擇也都有各自的好處和不好的地方。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，把寵物當(dāng)家人的好處在于不寂寞;每個(gè)人都有愛(ài)心;閑暇時(shí)間有心理寄托(spiritual/psychological sustenance)等等，而缺點(diǎn)則可以說(shuō)人會(huì)變得孤僻;衛(wèi)生問(wèn)題;寵物可能傳染病毒等等。只要能言之有理即可。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Throughout history, animals have always been great companions to man. In today's society, we frequently treat our pets as members of family, nursing them when they are sick, and playing with them when they are well. I believe that the relationships that people have with their pets are healthy for many reasons.

　　Firstly, animals provide companionship for people who are too old to maintain regular friendships. It is most common for one spouse to outlive the other. Frequently, the surviving spouse does not remarry, and eventually, all his or her friends die. When one is elderly, it is difficult to make new friends. In this type of situation, having a pet as a companion is greatly preferable to spending all of one's time alone. While a pet cannot speak, it can understand its master's emotions, and usually responds accordingly.

　　Secondly, animals have been proven to reduce their master's stress. This is probably because an animal is always happy to see its master, and gives the master unconditional love. As long as the master is kind to his/her pet, the pet will be devoted and faithful. A pet also provides a friendly face after a stressful day. For example, I have a pet dog. After taking an exam, the only thing I want to do is go home and play with my dog. He always brings me much needed cheer and happiness.

　　Lastly, having an animal can prepare a young couple for having children. A young animal is very difficult to take care of. Let us take the example of a puppy. One can never leave a puppy by itself. A puppy must be constantly taken care of; he must be toilet-trained and disciplined. Raising an animal to be happy and sociable is very much like raising a child to possess the same attributes. While a puppy is obviously easier to take care of than a child, it can show the prospective parents where some of the difficulties will lie when raising a baby.

　　In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy. Having a pet can reduce loneliness, stress, and prepare one for the huge experience of having a child. Pets are often referred to as man's best friend, and for good reason.