托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：traditional house or modern apartment building

　　Live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?

　　Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　關(guān)于住宅從便利性的角度來展開是比較簡(jiǎn)單的，因此選擇現(xiàn)代公寓更容易寫。相比傳統(tǒng)的房子：主要是方便，設(shè)施更完整，上下水(sewerage system);互聯(lián)網(wǎng)接入(accessing internet);有線電視系統(tǒng)(cable TV);煤氣供應(yīng)(gas supply);容易清掃，清掃范圍少。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Choosing a home is a very personal decision to make. Some people prefer to live in traditional houses, while others would rather live in modern apartment buildings. Personally, I would prefer to live in a modern building over a traditional house. Modern buildings provide better services, they are stronger and safer, and they are more conveniently located. When people move into a modern apartment building, they are immediately surrounded by all of the comforts they could possibly want. Modern buildings typically have new plumbing and hardware. Because of this there are usually very few problems with new apartment buildings. In addition to this, they also come supplied with refrigerators, washing machines, air conditioning, and the Internet. Many new buildings have the added bonus of having a workout facility or a swimming pool. All of these advantages make an apartment a much more attractive option than a traditional house. Modern buildings are also stronger and safer than traditional houses. They are made completely of concrete, which is a very durable material. These buildings are always designed by important architects who have a detailed knowledge of building materials, and methods that ensure that natural disasters will not affect the stability of the complex. In addition to this, all modern buildings have to be inspected by engineers, who carefully evaluate the structure to ensure that it is sound and can withstand natural or unnatural disasters. Many older structures were built using the experience of the builder rather than any empirical understanding of building materials and the forces they can withstand. Traditional houses are also usually built in quiet areas outside the city. Most modern apartment buildings are constructed in the core of the city, offering the residents a wide range of services right outside their door. Detailed analyses are made by civic engineers and city planners to ensure that all necessary services are readily available. This includes transportation, shopping, employment and recreational facilities. Living too far outside the city can be a hindrance to one's business and social life.