托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：dancing play important role in culture

　　Does dancing play an important role in a culture?

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這個題目乍看起來很不好寫。同意這個觀點(diǎn)(Dancing is really important in every culture.)?？梢圆扇t depends 的策略。舞蹈的娛樂作用(as a important mean of entertainments)也是important role in a culture，所以種文化中都有其獨(dú)特的舞蹈形式(dancing form)。原始社會(primitive society)時，舞蹈是非常重要的。慶祝(celebration; festival)，祈禱(pray)，宗教儀式(ritual) 等等活動中，舞蹈都是最主要的組成部分(one of the most important components)。隨著社會的發(fā)展，宗教儀式(ritual)演變成了歌劇(opera)，舞蹈仍然是很重要的娛樂手段。時間進(jìn)入21世紀(jì)，各種娛樂手段開始豐富起來，舞蹈盡管已經(jīng)不是主流的(main)娛樂方式，但是仍然非常重要。某年的奧斯卡(Oscar)得主就是一個歌舞劇(musical drama)——芝加哥(Chicago).

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　There are a number of qualities that have always been present in cultures, recent or ancient. These qualities can be anything from art forms to culturally gained knowledge. These qualities make the culture unique, and allow the culture to offer something interesting to the world. Throughout history, dancing has always played such a role in cultures. This is because dance allows us to express emotion, preserve heritage, and entertain. Dancing has always held a high position in culture, as it is an excellent way of expressing emotion. Much like the painter using color to convey emotion, dancers can use their body as a tool to show the onlooker their happiness, sadness, pain, etc. Dancing is also an excellent method of retaining and preserving culture. Many cultures have dance as part of their ceremonies, whether the ceremony is religious or patriotic in form. For example, it is a widely practiced norm to have people dance out a glorious moment in battle. In religion, it is common for people to dance to appease the God or Gods. Because of this, dancing is an excellent way to maintain culture, and ensure that important moments of the past are not forgotten. In modern days, it is much more common for dancing to be seen as a form of entertainment. Dancing has become somewhat of a sport in some countries, for example, ballroom dancing is very popular in the United States. There are hundreds of bars and disco clubs all over China which focus on dancing. They provide disc jockeys, more commonly referred to as "D.J.s", and play loud, repetitive music which encourages the young people to dance. There are many different styles of dance, but all bring the dancer to have fun, and get a good workout at the same time.