托福寫作資料庫之教育篇

托福寫作資料庫之教育篇內(nèi)容如下：

Do you agree or disagree：For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children’s education (5-10歲) or on higher education? 政府應(yīng)該重視兒童的基礎(chǔ)教育還是高等教育?

文章布局：讓步反駁寫法。

寫作思路：三分讓步;七分反駁：

作家立場(chǎng)：政府應(yīng)該重視基礎(chǔ)教育。

思路拓展：

政府重視基礎(chǔ)教育的利好：(對(duì)于個(gè)人，對(duì)于家庭，對(duì)于國家)

1. 對(duì)于個(gè)人而言，普及基礎(chǔ)教育可以幫助很多貧困的，來著偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的孩子們精神上成長，學(xué)術(shù)上精進(jìn)，因此，可以很大程度上在未來幫助他們改變命運(yùn)，擺脫貧困。例如，中國政府近年來加大對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)教育的扶持力度。

2. 對(duì)于家庭而言，國家普及基礎(chǔ)教育可以緩解家庭的財(cái)政負(fù)擔(dān)，尤其是對(duì)于很多工薪一族，家庭節(jié)省下預(yù)算可以提高生活質(zhì)量，享受娛樂生活，因此，給孩子們提供更加幸福，快樂的成長環(huán)境。

3. 對(duì)于國家而言，普及教育可以提高國民的基本素質(zhì)，幫助更多的學(xué)生為升入大學(xué)打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。基礎(chǔ)教育的成功是高等教育發(fā)展的堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)，因此，基礎(chǔ)教育發(fā)展，國家才能培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀人才，人才可以為國家的發(fā)展提供注入新鮮活力，提高國家在國際舞臺(tái)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。

政府重視高等教育的利好 + 再加以反駁：

1. 另外，那些不同意支持初級(jí)的教育的人有時(shí)候會(huì)找到理由去支持他們的觀點(diǎn)，即是，優(yōu)秀的社會(huì)精英，例如，企業(yè)家，文學(xué)家，科學(xué)家更多的是由高等教育培養(yǎng)的，他們可以為生產(chǎn)力的發(fā)展提供驅(qū)動(dòng)力。但是，我想反駁的是，基礎(chǔ)教育使更多人辨別是非，增強(qiáng)守法意識(shí)及愛國情懷，培養(yǎng)更多行為規(guī)范的良好公民比培養(yǎng)少量的社會(huì)精英的社會(huì)意義更大。

原創(chuàng)語料庫：

1. Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without a fine education, many of us believe, is an unlucky sufferer of adverse circumstances, deprived of one of the greatest opportunities. 教育是時(shí)代的關(guān)鍵詞匯，一個(gè)人沒有受過教育，我們認(rèn)為，是逆境的犧牲品，被剝奪了寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：首段亮劍，背景介紹。

2. elementary education = primary education = basic education 初等教育

3. higher education = college education 高等教育

拓展： liberal education 通識(shí)教育

4. People have been debating for a long time whether elementary education is more important than higher education without reaching any definite consensus. 人們多年來一直在爭(zhēng)議是否初等教育比高等交通更加重要，沒有達(dá)成一致意見。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：凝練句型，避免寫作 some people think that …… while others believe that ……

5. As I see it, more public efforts and financial aid should be allocated to primary education even though college education still enjoys its unique advantages. 我認(rèn)為,政府努力及財(cái)政預(yù)算應(yīng)該更多地分配給基礎(chǔ)教育，盡管高等教育有其獨(dú)有利好。

6. Notwithstanding all that, those who disagree to give financial support to basic education will sometimes use some reasons to support the idea that …… 另外，那些不同意支持初級(jí)教育的人有時(shí)候會(huì)找到理由去支持他們的想法 ……

點(diǎn)評(píng)：Notwithstanding all that 雖然如此

4. as for every individual 對(duì)于個(gè)人而言

5. to popularize basic education 普及基礎(chǔ)教育

6. help those needy children in remote rural areas to be schooled 可以幫助很大貧困的，來著偏遠(yuǎn)的地區(qū)的孩子們接受教育。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：school為動(dòng)詞，意味接受中小學(xué)教育(亮點(diǎn)表達(dá))

拓展：schooling 中小學(xué)教育

拓展：needy = poverty-stricken = impoverished貧困的(經(jīng)典三劍客)

拓展：straitened = destitute = poor 貧困的(經(jīng)典三劍客)

7. therefore = as a result = hence = thereby = in this sense = in light of this statement 因此……

8. to large extent 很大程度上

9. help them change their fates幫助他們改變命運(yùn)

10. shake off poverty 擺脫貧困

11. Chinese government has been strengthening various support in terms of optimizing basic education中國政府近年來加大對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)教育的扶持力度。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：in terms of 在……方面

拓展：optimize = perfect = ameliorate v完善，改善

12. on the side of the family對(duì)于家庭來說

13. reduce the financial burden of a family 緩解家庭的財(cái)政負(fù)擔(dān)

14. especially for those wage-earners 尤其對(duì)于工薪一族

15. …… improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time in traveling， pursuing private interests or enjoying leisure activities …… 可以通過廣泛游覽，追求個(gè)人愛好，享受娛樂生活來提高生活質(zhì)量。

16. on the part of a nation 對(duì)于國家而言

17. improve the basic quality of a nation’s population 提高國民的基本素質(zhì)

18. lay a solid foundation for …… 為……打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)

19. get enrolled in prestigious universities 升入名校學(xué)

20. the success of elementary education 基礎(chǔ)教育的成功

21. foster more gifted and exceptional people 培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀人才

22. the increase of talented people人才的增加

23. inject new life into the further development of a nation為國家的發(fā)展提供注入新鮮活力

拓展：inject new life into = inject fresh vitality into …… 為……注入新鮮活力

24. improve the competiveness in the international area 提高在國際舞臺(tái)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力

25. top social elite 頂尖社會(huì)精英

26. business leaders, man of letters and scientific researchers 企業(yè)家, 文學(xué)家, 科學(xué)家

27. provide driving force for the further development of productivity 為生產(chǎn)力的發(fā)展提供了驅(qū)動(dòng)力

28. tell right from wrong = make a clear distinction between right and wrong 辨別是非

29. enhance one’s lawful awareness and arouse one’s patriotism 增強(qiáng)守法意識(shí), 喚醒愛國情懷

拓展：intensify = enhance = strengthen 增強(qiáng)

30. The social significance of fine education lies more in cultivating more well-behaved social citizens and less in nurturing finite high achievers 培養(yǎng)更多行為規(guī)范的良好公民比培養(yǎng)少量的社會(huì)精英的意義更加重大。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：lie in 在于 ……

點(diǎn)評(píng)：high achievers = great achievers 成功者

拓展：nurture = foster = cultivate 培養(yǎng)