托福滿分作文賞析二

托福寫作滿分作文題目：運氣在成功里所扮演的角色
"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do　you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain　your position.
托福寫作滿分作文范文
The Role of Luck in Success　It has been said that when people succeed, it is because of hard work and that luck has　nothing to do with success. Although I believe that hard work is very important and is the surest　way to success for most people, I must disagree with this statement. It cannot be denied that luck　often plays an important role in success. For example, many important discoveries have been　made by accident. There have been many cases of researchers and inventors making major　breakthroughs while they were actually trying to solve another problem or create a different device.
Furthermore, there is something to be said for simply being in the right place at the right　time-perhaps meeting someone by chance who can offer a good job or rare opportunity. And of　course, there are the rare examples of gamblers and lottery winners who beat the odds and achieve sudden and unexpected success.
While the influence of luck cannot be ignored, this is not to say that one should depend on it　and ignore the value of hard work. If one is willing to work hard, I believe that success will　eventually be achieved, with or without the added benefit of luck. Moreover, hard work is often an　essential ingredient of luck because it enables one to take advantage of a lucky encounter. If the　scientist has not worked hard to develop his knowledge and skills, he may not recognize that lucky　breakthrough when it comes along. Therefore, my suggestion is not to count on luck to bring you　success. Instead, work hard and keep your eyes open for that lucky opportunity.
托福寫作滿分作文譯文
有人說一個人會成功是因為努力，而運氣和成功則是一點關(guān)系也沒有。雖然我相信努力　很重要，而且對大部分的人來說，努力是成功最可靠的方法，可是我不得不反對這種說法?！∧芊癯晒?，運氣扮演著一個很重要的角色，這是不可否認(rèn)的事實。例如，很多重要的發(fā)現(xiàn)都是在偶然情況下發(fā)生的。有很多實例表明，有重大突破的研究人員和發(fā)明家，原本是要試圖解決其他問題或是發(fā)明別的儀器。
而且，僅僅是天時地利這方面也有一些關(guān)系--也許是偶然碰到能提供好的工作和珍貴機會的人。當(dāng)然也有極少數(shù)賭徒和彩票得主得到突如其來、意想不到的成功。
盡管運氣的影響力不容忽視，但也不表示人就應(yīng)該完全靠運氣，而忽視努力的價值。如果一個人愿意努力，不論有沒有運氣額外的幫助，我相信終究還是會成功。此外，因為努力 能讓人充分利用幸運的機會，所以努力通常也是運氣的必要因素。如果科學(xué)家沒有努力培養(yǎng) 自　己的知識和技巧，那么當(dāng)某個幸運的突破出現(xiàn)時，他可能也看不出來。因此，我建議大家 不要指望運氣能帶來成功。相反地，應(yīng)該努力，并隨時注意不要錯過任何好機會.