2011年12月英語六級作文范文及評析(上海新東方版)

　　此次作文操作和以前一樣，原因現(xiàn)象類文章，以前的老套路也能套上。但不同在于，考生必須事先看懂考卷中的文字，林肯的那一段話。“工欲善其事，必先利其器。”簡言之，良好的準備是成功的基礎。如果能在文中體現(xiàn)preparation和success這兩個關鍵詞，要點就基本體現(xiàn)完整了。

　　從上午四級到下午六級，我們可以明確的發(fā)現(xiàn)，作文寫作方法用老的套路和步驟完全可行。第一段，表述成功和準備的重要性；第二段，分析原因第一、第二、第三；第三段，總結。但如果考生讀不懂提綱所示，那么就麻煩了。

　　所以，重點是看懂題目，并且能把題目解釋成一到兩個簡單的關鍵詞。中文理解力很重要。能理解，行文就是模板。不能理解，模板就是廢物。就這次作文來看，四六級作文在借用國際知名考試的出題模式。也再次驗證了其科學性。

　　以下我們用新東方四級材料來說明文章的簡單，和上午四級作文幾乎一樣，只需改動幾個詞就行。這篇文章是新東方四級寫作10年來的材料，套用如常。不一定能獲取高分，但能證明模板套用的可行性。

　　還是那句話，我們不猜題不壓題，廣大新東方學員學到的是不變應萬變的應試寫作方法。另外，作為國內(nèi)權威的科學性較高的英語等級考試，它會更多的借用國際權威的英語考試出題模式。

　　Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway。

　　Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything。

　　I believe that where there is a preparation there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts。

　　(來源：上海新東方國內(nèi)考試部 四六級教研組)