2017年12月四級(jí)寫作第二套試題解析（太原新東方）

Nowadays, the relationship between parents and children has become a hot topic. The majority of parents and children experience some tension and aggravation because of the nervous relationship between them. As a result, this kind of relationship requires close attention of the whole society.

Confronted with the nervous relationship between parents and children, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, parents should spend much time on communicating with their children. Parents can know their children better by having a conversation with them. For another, children are supposed to put themselves in their parents’ shoes. For instance, sometimes, parents may be strict to us, but we know that they just want us to be better.

Personally, I believe that listening plays an extremely important role in the relationship between parents and children. To put it in another way, you can listen to your parents instead of quarrelling with them. I hope the relationship between parents and children can be handled through the efforts of both parents and children。

此篇作文考察的話題是與我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钕嚓P(guān)聯(lián)的親子關(guān)系話題。題目要求我們針對(duì)如何最好地處理父母與孩子之間的關(guān)系寫一篇作文。文章主題明朗，但需要同學(xué)們知道handle(處理)一詞的含義。接著， 我們就可以按照之前講過的議論文類型之一——問題解決型的寫作方法開始寫作。

第一段：問題引入段。引出我們要討論的親子關(guān)系的話題，提出當(dāng)前親子關(guān)系存在著問題。用過渡句引出下文具體解決問題的方法。

第二段：主題論述段。從家長和孩子兩方面去列舉處理親子關(guān)系的途徑。首句承上啟下，接著分述具體途徑，擴(kuò)展句中可以用舉例論證的方法豐富內(nèi)容。

第三段：自我觀點(diǎn)+總結(jié)展望。簡要總結(jié)你所認(rèn)為的改善親子關(guān)系的重要方法，并表達(dá)愿景。大家視字?jǐn)?shù)情況而定。