2014年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題：受益最深的一項(xiàng)校園活動(dòng)

　　作文題目:

　　a campus activity that has benefited you most. state the reasons at least 120 No more than 180 words.

　　參考范文：

　　滬江網(wǎng)校版：

　　?University is a place that provides a number of interesting activities to enrich our life on campus. In the two years, I have attended a couple of activities such as football club and reading society. The most benefited one popping into my mind is the sports meeting last month.

　　First of all, sports meeting offers a great opportunity to draw students’ attention from busy studies to the sports field. As students, most of our time is killed in the classroom and library. However, doing sports could be seen as a relaxing ingredient in tedious study life.

　　Secondly, as a member of football club, I attended the football game that day. I enjoyed the feeling of being united. During the game, we encouraged each other when we felt frustrated; we cheered for each other when we scored a goal. All these taught me to be more and more team-oriented.

　　Lastly, doing sports benefits to our physical health. Increasingly sedentary lifestyle causes laziness and possibility of obesity. Therefore, this sports meeting on campus mobilized our students to enjoy the fun of sports.

　　This is the campus activity that has benefited not only me but also most of the students.

　　新東方在線版1：

　　The Most Impressive Campus Activity

　　Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year.

　　That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious than winning or losing.

　　To be brief, we should participate in more campus activities, not only can we get a better understanding of what we have learnt before, but also make new friends and discover our interests.

　　寫(xiě)作思路指導(dǎo)：

　　第一步，確定你印象最深的校園活動(dòng)是什么。

　　第二步，該校園活動(dòng)主題和內(nèi)容是什么。

　　第三步，活動(dòng)的啟發(fā)和影響。

　　題型不再局限于純粹的議論文，而是各個(gè)文章體裁夾雜和糅合。要對(duì)文章的體裁和相應(yīng)寫(xiě)法有全面的理解和掌握。

　　新東方在線版2：

　　Currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to academic achievement, neglecting campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its like. However, from my perspective, we youngsters should take participate in more campus activities.

　　I hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on various fronts. At the top of the list, social activities, such as song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our acquaintances. In addition, students would widen horizon, increase knowledge during the period taking part in campus activities. Last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”; therefore, students’ choice to join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief our burden, which will be beneficial to the study.

　　In conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and meaningful activities at campus. Hence, I suggest schools can hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically and psychologically.

　　(沈陽(yáng)新東方學(xué)校-吳欣慰老師)

　　文都教育版1：

　　The Campus Activity that Has Benefited Me Most

　　As a coin has two sides,when it comes to “what campus activity that has benefited you most”,different people may have different opinions.As far as I am concerned,it is the psychological composition competition that has benefited me most.

　　There are,to my mind,plenty of shaping factors,among which,the following ones are particularly worth mentioning.One of the most valuable one is it is the field that I like.I can find a place to say something,either to the world or to myself,which will make me feel relax,get a good mood and enjoy myself.Another fundamental one which should not be neglected is I can appreciate others’ merits and find my own weakness,and then make up for it.Last but not least,I can find people who have the same thinking and interest with me,and become friends.Take myself for instance,it is in the psychological composition competition that I find my soul mate.

　　Judging from the reams of evidence,it is safe for me to conclude that psychological composition competition is the campus activity that has benefited me most.If it had not been for it,I could not have enjoyed myself so much.

　　范文譯文

　　正如一塊硬幣具有兩面性一樣，當(dāng)問(wèn)到“什么校園活動(dòng)讓你最受益”的時(shí)候，不同的人會(huì)有不同的觀點(diǎn)。就我而言，我認(rèn)為使我最受益的活動(dòng)是心理征文比賽。

　　在我看來(lái)，有很多原因讓我形成這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。其中，下面這些原因是最值得一提的。首先，也是最有價(jià)值的是因?yàn)檫@是我喜歡的領(lǐng)域。在這里我可以找到一個(gè)地方來(lái)傾吐自己的心聲，可能是對(duì)世界的，也可能是對(duì)自己的。這樣我就會(huì)覺(jué)得很輕松，有一個(gè)好的心情，并享受自己的生活。另外一個(gè)不能忽視的重要原因是，在這里我能欣賞到別人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的缺點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行彌補(bǔ)。最后，我可以在這個(gè)比賽中找到和我有同樣的思想和興趣的人，并成為好朋友。就拿我自己來(lái)說(shuō)，我就是在心理征文比賽中找到了自己的知己。

　　根據(jù)上面提出的證據(jù)，我得出“心理征文比賽使我最受益”這個(gè)結(jié)論是很合理的。要是沒(méi)有這個(gè)活動(dòng)，我不能如此的熱愛(ài)我的生活。

　　文都教育版2：

　　The Most Beneficial Activity in My Campus

　　It is well known that university is greatly different from high school mainly due to that university will hold a large number of activities, which benefits college students a lot. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long-distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I am a freshman. The money collected by this activity is contributed to Project Hope.

　　It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. To begin with, the activity reminds me of the great importance of physical health. Before I go to college, I only focus on academic achievements while the physical health misses my attention. But, the long-running tells me in time that a sound mind lies in a sound body. Additionally, during my participation in this activity, I am informed well that there are still many children in rural areas who have to drop out of school because of impoverished families. Thus, for one thing, I fully realize the great importance of helping them fulfill their dreams. For another thing, I cherish the opportunity to study in university more, for when compared with those children in poverty-stricken areas, we should harbor a grateful heart.

　　By and large, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I deem the long running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.

　　范文譯文：

　　眾所周知，大學(xué)與高中截然不同，主要原因是大學(xué)里會(huì)舉辦很多校園活動(dòng)，而這些大學(xué)活動(dòng)使大學(xué)生受益匪淺。我認(rèn)為最有益的校園活動(dòng)是大一時(shí)，由學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦的“愛(ài)心長(zhǎng)跑”。這次長(zhǎng)跑籌集的善款用于捐助希望工程。

　　我很榮幸參加了這次長(zhǎng)跑，因?yàn)檫@次活動(dòng)使我的身心都獲得了很大裨益。首先，這次活動(dòng)提醒我身體健康的重要性。在我上大學(xué)前，我只關(guān)心自己的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，而忽視了健康。但是，這次長(zhǎng)跑及時(shí)提醒我——健康的身體孕育健康的靈魂。此外，通過(guò)參加此次長(zhǎng)跑，我深刻了解到還有許多偏遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)的小孩因?yàn)榧彝ヘ毨П黄容z學(xué)。因此，一方面我充分意識(shí)到幫助這些小孩實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想是何其重要;另一方面，我更珍惜自己能上大學(xué)的機(jī)會(huì)。因?yàn)?，和那些貧困地區(qū)的小孩相比，我們應(yīng)該懷有一顆感恩的心。

　　總體而言，雖然我參加過(guò)許多校園活動(dòng)，但是我認(rèn)為這次愛(ài)心長(zhǎng)跑最為有益。我也期待有更多精彩而有意義的校園活動(dòng)舉行。