2014年6月英語四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：豫園（滬江網(wǎng)校版）

　　Yu Garden

　　If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.

　　Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.

　　I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.

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　　本次四級(jí)作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準(zhǔn)備好圖片題寫作的同學(xué)有點(diǎn)措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的某景點(diǎn)，寫起來相對(duì)簡單。此類文章在結(jié)構(gòu)上的要求不像議論文那樣嚴(yán)格，所以可以在語言文字上博出彩，增加詞匯的豐富性、句子的流暢性都是不錯(cuò)的加分點(diǎn)。