2007年樂山市中考英語滿分作文范文

　　The" Sunshine Sports" program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it. Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.

　　No matter what students think about the program，all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.

　　點評：本文最大的優(yōu)點在于，作者在傳達不同的學(xué)生為什么選擇不同的運動的時，所使用的表達方式，比如They think，They believe，They find it good等，避免了重復(fù)，展現(xiàn)了語言的多樣化。 這并不是每個同學(xué)都能做到的，很多同學(xué)在表達觀點時很容易犯重復(fù)的毛病，通通使用I think，這樣使文章看起來很乏味，因此，本文作者豐富的表達方式有很大的借鑒意義。