溫泉讓我得到休息

題目：請(qǐng)以“Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的作文。

Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest

溫泉讓我得到休息

We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!" I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring. One step,two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.

我們脫下外套，快速奔向檸檬泉，當(dāng)我第一次把腳伸進(jìn)水中時(shí)，我大聲喊道：“哇，水是熱的!”我一開(kāi)始不知道水如此熱，所以我有點(diǎn)兒擔(dān)心會(huì)被熱水燙到。于是，我小心翼翼地走進(jìn)溫泉，一步，兩步......我能感覺(jué)到熱量慢慢地進(jìn)入我的身體。

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