Our Housing Estate
我們的小區(qū)
There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our housing estate Rainbow Estate, is one of them.
浦東新區(qū)有很多漂亮的小區(qū),我們的小區(qū)——彩虹小區(qū),是其中之一。
You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2. In the gardon there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1. A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there.
小區(qū)中間有三條街道。在第二條街道前面是一個(gè)美麗的花園,花園里有個(gè)噴泉。在第一條街道的右面是一個(gè)商店,而第三街道的左邊是一個(gè)巨大的運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng),可以看到男男女女在那邊做運(yùn)動(dòng)。
There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.
在我們的小區(qū)有一個(gè)小小的幼兒園。對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō),住在小區(qū)十分方便和舒服。
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