2011年浙江寧波市中考英語作文

 Ⅹ. 書面表達(dá)（共15分）

為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議。假如你是劉波，用英語向校長(zhǎng)寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的建議信。注意：文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。  

 

Dear Headmaster,

       I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will______________________________

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       Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!

                                                                                                     Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                      Liu Bo

 

 

Ⅹ. 書面表達(dá)（共15分） One possible version: 

Dear Headmaster,

I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.

As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.

       Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!

                                                                                                  Yours sincerely,

Liu Bo

 

 

書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.         Our school will open the library more often (open computer rooms / art rooms...).

2.         Our school can organize more after-class activities.

3.         Our school can give us more time for sports (art / music...)

4.         Our school should organize fewer exams.

5.         Our teachers will make classes more interesting (be our friends...)

6.         Our teachers will talk less but more clearly in class.

7.         Our teachers will give us less homework and finish class on time(and teach us how to learn well after class …)

二、本大題總分為15分，按五個(gè)檔次給分

第一檔（14—15分）能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語言基本無誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。

第二檔（11—13分）能寫明大部分要點(diǎn)，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文比較連貫，表達(dá)比較清楚。

第三檔（8—10分）能寫明部分要點(diǎn)，語言有較多錯(cuò)誤，行文不太連貫，但尚能表達(dá)意思。

第四檔（5—7分）能寫明少部分或個(gè)別要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤較多，只有個(gè)別句子可讀、可看懂。

第五檔（0—4分）基本上沒有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤多，只有一些詞匯堆積, 不知所云。