雅思寫作范文及解析：關(guān)于online shopping的討論

雅思寫作題目：In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

雅思寫作題目講解：

首段 ： 背景描述 + 論點(diǎn) 轉(zhuǎn)述(正向 / 反向 ) + 自己的觀點(diǎn)

第二段 ：支持/反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn) 論點(diǎn) +理由

第三段 ：支持/反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn) 論點(diǎn)+ 例證

第四段： 讓步段 “讓步+轉(zhuǎn)折句”即觀點(diǎn)的合理性，+對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)的反駁

第五段： 總結(jié)全文 +強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn) +得出結(jié)論(提倡的解決措施)

雅思寫作范文：

Science and technology developing rapidly, especially for the Internet popularizing, gives rise to various considerable changing and advantages , in terms of online shopping , relative money logger applying widely and enhancing the effectiveness of the work greatly, etc .However, the potentially detrimental impact from Internet can not be ignored, which is conspicuously embodies in the alienation between individuals and the deficiency of skills of effective communication .After the thoughtful and serious consideration , I prefer to harbor the above perspective that the Internet has its own demerits and localization more .

科學(xué)技術(shù)的迅猛發(fā)展，特別是互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及，使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物、相對(duì)理財(cái)工具的廣泛應(yīng)用以及工作效率的大幅度提高等方面產(chǎn)生了各種可觀的變化和優(yōu)勢(shì)?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)的三重影響不容忽視，這突出地體現(xiàn)在個(gè)人之間的疏離和有效溝通技巧的缺乏上。經(jīng)過(guò)深思熟慮和認(rèn)真考慮，我傾向于持有互聯(lián)網(wǎng)有自己的觀點(diǎn)。缺點(diǎn)和定位更多。

To begin with, emotional alienation between individuals has been the irreversible tendency of the current society. Namely, an increasingly prevalent number of individuals in current society consider the Internet as the indispensable part of life to devote more time and energy into entertaining on it, unavoidably, to exacerbate the preference and awareness of everyone living in the self-centered world without too much considering the relation and emotion with others.

首先，人與人之間的情感異化一直是當(dāng)今社會(huì)不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的趨勢(shì)。也就是說(shuō)，在當(dāng)今社會(huì)中，越來(lái)越多的人認(rèn)為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)是生活中不可缺少的一部分，為了花費(fèi)更多的時(shí)間和精力在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上娛樂(lè)，不可避免地會(huì)加劇生活在以自我為中心的世界中的每個(gè)人的偏好和意識(shí)。多考慮與他人的關(guān)系和情感。

Besides, the Internet disseminating and applying widely exerts the devastating impact on the social skills of individuals .For example, Individuals can tackle almost various issues and troubles in daily routine by using the Internet, inevitably, resulting in lacking of face-to-face verbal communication and coordination with others, even to lose the skills of coping with the practical issues in daily life in private with clear trait of thought and effective approach.

此外，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的廣泛傳播和應(yīng)用對(duì)個(gè)人的社會(huì)技能產(chǎn)生了破壞性的影響。例如，個(gè)人在日常工作中，不可避免地會(huì)利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)解決各種各樣的問(wèn)題和麻煩，導(dǎo)致缺乏面對(duì)面的語(yǔ)言交流。與他人交往和協(xié)調(diào)，甚至喪失了處理日常生活中實(shí)際問(wèn)題的能力，具有清晰的思維品質(zhì)和有效的途徑。

There is no denying that the Internet not only brings about the convenient and fast, but provides the unprecedented platform to communicate with individuals without going outside, however, from another point of view, remaining within doors to communicate tend to exacerbate the emotional alienation between individuals further and emerge with the loss of skills of adapting to society and dealing with specific issue that confused them in daily life.

毋庸置疑，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)不僅帶來(lái)了方便快捷，而且為個(gè)人提供了前所未有的交流平臺(tái)，而不走出門外，然而，從另一個(gè)角度來(lái)看，留在門內(nèi)交流往往加劇了情感的疏離。在個(gè)人之間，隨著適應(yīng)社會(huì)和處理日常生活中使他們困惑的特定問(wèn)題的技能的喪失而進(jìn)一步浮現(xiàn)。

On balance, based on the above analyzing and thought ,conspicuously , I firmly harbor the perspective that Internet has the compelling obligation to cause the alienation between individuals and certain loss of social skills due to its insuperable limitation .Only when we face up with pessimistic consequence triggered by Internet and take the effective and efficient way can we probably change the deteriorating social phenomenon .

綜上所述，基于以上的分析和思考，顯然，我堅(jiān)定地認(rèn)為，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)具有強(qiáng)制性的義務(wù)來(lái)造成個(gè)人之間的疏離，以及由于它無(wú)法克服的局限性而造成的某些社會(huì)技能的損失?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)引發(fā)的系列事件，采取有效而有效的途徑，可能改變?nèi)找鎼夯纳鐣?huì)現(xiàn)象。

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