雅思寫作中常見的7個(gè)語法錯(cuò)誤為我們帶來在雅思大小作文中中國學(xué)生常出現(xiàn)的語法錯(cuò)誤。雅思寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)當(dāng)中首先一個(gè)就是詞語句型等的正確性。這毫無疑問,若是在語法等方面出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤的話,極大程度上會(huì)影響考官對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容和句子,段落間邏輯關(guān)系的理解。
詞匯和語法是構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子的兩個(gè)基本要素。但是大多數(shù)考生都會(huì)存在一個(gè)誤區(qū):就是過分注重詞匯,追求所謂高分詞匯。但如果文章中存在大量的語法錯(cuò)誤,就會(huì)讓考官感到是在讀一個(gè)語法錯(cuò)誤百出用詞卻極為高深的畸形文章。這種語法的基本功和用詞的難度之間不搭配的情況存在與很多學(xué)生的文章里。本文就學(xué)生作文或者漢譯英句子中出現(xiàn)的典型錯(cuò)誤,給大家七點(diǎn)提示。
第一易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
Government claims that teacher should teach student some self-protection skills.
錯(cuò)誤分析:可數(shù)名詞不可“裸用”。
在正式英文寫作里,凡是常規(guī)的可數(shù)名詞,必須在前面有限定詞,比如冠詞a/an/the,物主代詞my/their/your等等,指示代詞this/that等等。否則,這個(gè)可數(shù)名詞就必須用復(fù)數(shù)。而在這個(gè)句子中g(shù)overnment要么用the government,要么用government,后面的teacher和student都一樣要加上復(fù)數(shù)。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:The government claims that teachers should teach students some self-protection skills.
第二易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
錯(cuò)誤分析:英語中動(dòng)詞原形是不能作主語的,而且在這個(gè)句子中如果work做了動(dòng)詞,后面can enhance也是動(dòng)詞,就出現(xiàn)雙謂語的情況,因此把work改成working.
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
第三易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.
錯(cuò)誤分析:詞性使用錯(cuò)誤。
different的詞性為形容詞,而修飾形容詞或者動(dòng)詞的時(shí)候應(yīng)該用副詞。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.
第四易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
A lot of houses were collapsed in the earthquake.
錯(cuò)誤分析:句中出現(xiàn)雙謂語。
句中collapse已經(jīng)為動(dòng)詞,再加be動(dòng)詞之后就變成了被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu),此處be純屬多余。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:A lot of houses collapsed in the earthquake.
第五易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.
錯(cuò)誤分析:當(dāng)我們用到代詞的時(shí)候,就一定要看所指代的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù),根據(jù)名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)來使用相應(yīng)的代詞。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.
第六易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
Letters were the most important way of communication in the past , e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
錯(cuò)誤分析:這個(gè)句子的句型并不屬于簡單句、并列句、或者復(fù)合句中的任何一種的定義。因?yàn)槌霈F(xiàn)了兩套動(dòng)詞,因此我們可以將這個(gè)句子變成并列句,而前后兩句之間是對(duì)比關(guān)系,所以我們可以在中間加對(duì)比連詞或副詞,比如while。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:Letters were the most important way of communication in the past while now e-mail becomes its biggest rival now.
第七易錯(cuò)點(diǎn):
There are a great deal of people go abroad every year.
錯(cuò)誤分析:當(dāng)我們用到there be句型的時(shí)候,后面不能再出現(xiàn)動(dòng)詞原形。因此要將go變換形式,改為going,或者將句子轉(zhuǎn)換為定語從句,在people后面加上who。
因此,這個(gè)句子要改成:There are a great deal of people going abroad every year. 或There are a great deal of people who go abroad every year.
以上就是雅思寫作中常見的7個(gè)語法錯(cuò)誤的全部內(nèi)容,我們可以看出上文舉出的很多語法錯(cuò)誤的例子是為了故意湊出從句等復(fù)雜句型而按照自己的思維習(xí)慣造出來的句子。這種故意為了拿高分去追求句子的復(fù)雜性的做法是不可取的。我們首先應(yīng)該保證的是作文的結(jié)構(gòu)正確和邏輯清晰。在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上再進(jìn)行句式的豐富。