雅思寫作最初段的構(gòu)成
那咱們研究最初段,第一個問題就是最初段是由什么組成的。最初段能夠說是關(guān)于標(biāo)題的一個最直接的回應(yīng),因而,一個最初段的組成基本是和標(biāo)題的構(gòu)成嚴(yán)密相關(guān)的。而雅思大作文的標(biāo)題構(gòu)成首要分紅兩類,一類是和觀念有關(guān)的標(biāo)題,比方說“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 這類標(biāo)題的構(gòu)成往往為“布景+標(biāo)題觀念+標(biāo)題問題”。另一類是和現(xiàn)實有關(guān)的標(biāo)題,比方說“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而這一類的標(biāo)題中就只要“布景現(xiàn)實+標(biāo)題問題”。
所以, 咱們的較為規(guī)范的最初段一般就是“布景引進(jìn)+標(biāo)題觀念復(fù)述+己方觀念表達(dá)”或是,“布景引進(jìn)+己方問題回應(yīng)”。
因而咱們在本篇先說一說最初段中的布景引進(jìn)的方法。這個部分我以為應(yīng)該是整個最初段從言語視點講最重要的部分,最需求同學(xué)們的注意。
一方面由于,學(xué)生往往會用較為隨意或千人一面的描繪一筆帶過,比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”這樣的老套話術(shù),會給考官模板的感覺,也讓考官對文章一開始就失掉愛好。另一個需求注重這一部分的重要原因是,這部分靈敏度很強,也就是能更好的展示自己的英語實力。
所以,比起簡略的贊同替換,咱們能夠把布景引進(jìn)分為五大類:
雅思寫作最初段寫法1 擺現(xiàn)實
也就是經(jīng)過對標(biāo)題主題的了解,寫一句對現(xiàn)實的描繪,然后引出標(biāo)題的論題或是問題。
例:1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)
There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...
2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)
The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...
3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
雅思寫作最初段寫法2 給原因
也就是根據(jù)標(biāo)題中的觀念或是標(biāo)題中的現(xiàn)實去向前推出一層原因,然后讓最初更有邏輯。
例:1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)
As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.
2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.
雅思寫作最初段寫法3 給成果
經(jīng)過關(guān)于成果的描繪,向上推出標(biāo)題論證的內(nèi)容。這個方法思路較繞,可是用恰當(dāng)也算是另辟蹊徑。
例:1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.
Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.
2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.
It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……
雅思寫作最初段寫法4 時刻比照
這樣的最初做法一般是將古今進(jìn)行比照,然后引出標(biāo)題的爭辯,或是主題。
例:1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)
People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….(現(xiàn)在的人與曩昔相比預(yù)期活得更長,更健康。)
2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)
In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.
3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.
雅思寫作最初段寫法5 地址比照
例:Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.(有些國家通行同性別教育形式;而有些國家實施同性別教育和混合教育,父母或者孩子自己能夠決議哪種形式更適合。)
最初段的布景寫作方法其實有許多許多種,只要是言語謹(jǐn)慎精確,而且思路契合邏輯,都是好的雅思大作文最初段。