雅思大作文議論文高分范文解析：金錢(qián)話題
Howfar do you agree with this statement?
Key words analysis
family: 家庭，也可表示家庭成員
possession: 財(cái)產(chǎn)，只所有所擁有的財(cái)富
Argument:
這是屬于議論文中的argument類(lèi)型，通常會(huì)在agree或disagree之間進(jìn)行選擇。但是該題特別提到說(shuō)how far do you agree or disagree，那么我們最好是能夠討論到這個(gè)事件的兩個(gè)方面，然后給出自己的意見(jiàn)。
Possible reasons:
財(cái)產(chǎn)可以帶來(lái)安定的生活，是快樂(lè)的基礎(chǔ)
財(cái)產(chǎn)也可以彰顯個(gè)人的成就，是一種榮譽(yù)的代表
只有財(cái)產(chǎn)卻不一定會(huì)快樂(lè)，要有朋友和家人分享
Model Essay 1 – Part 1
Introduction
Everybody wants to be happy, but there isoften a debate over what makes a person happy. Some people believe happinesscan only come from friends and family. According to other people, happinesscomes from money and possessions. I believe that happiness comes both fromclose family and friends and also from having enough money and possessions.
Main body 1
Firstly, everybody needs enough money tolive - to pay for a home, food and other necessities. If people have money tospare after paying for these things, they often spend money on possessionswhich make them feel happy for a short time. However, this kind of happinessoften does not last because money and possessions alone cannot bring happiness.Rich people can be very lonely if they don’t share their money and possessionswith others. It has also been proved that having a good time with friends andfamily brings more happiness than a fast car or new clothes.
Model Essay 1 – Part 2
Main body 2
On the other hand, very poor people are notusually happy, even if they have large families and many friends. Money worrieswill cause them a lot of stress and this will mean they are not able to enjoylife. Their friends and family may be able to support them and help them bylending them money, but this may lead to problems. I agree that family andfriends are important, but without a good income, they may not be enough.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I believe that both moneyand possessions as well as a family and friends are important to happiness andthat neither is more important than the other. People who don’t have enoughmoney to live but who have good friends and a strong family may be just asunhappy as wealthy people who have more than enough but no family or friends toshare it with.
