劍橋雅思小作文范文開頭段
The access routes to a hospital in 2007 and 2010 are shown in the upper and lower maps respectively.
主體段1:總體介紹主要的變化
It is clear that the ring road surrounding the hospital itself was largely unchanged between 2007 and 2010. However, the transport infrastructure was considerably upgraded, most notably with the addition of two roundabouts, and the expansion of the car parking and bus facilities.
主體段2:和 ring road 相關(guān)的變化,順帶寫了另一個(gè) roundabout
With regard to the ring road, the only change seen in 2010, compared to 2007, was the construction of a roundabout in the centre of the southern section, in place of the original T-junction with Hospital Road. At the other end of the same road, a further roundabout was built at the location of the crossroads with City Road.
主體段3:車站
In 2007, the hospital was served by six bus stops on Hospital Road, with three on each side. By 2010, these stops had disappeared and had been replaced by a bus station to the west of Hospital Road, with access to both roundabouts mentioned above.
主體段4:停車場
In 2007, there was only one car park, which stretched the full length of the east side of Hospital Road, with a single access point in the south-east of the ring road. By 2010, this had become a car park for staff only and a further car park for public use only had been constructed, to the right of the eastern section of the ring road.