必備雅思寫作連接詞分享 起承轉(zhuǎn)合一氣呵成
雅思寫作連接詞之起：
First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,
First and foremost;For one thing(… for another);On the one hand(…on the other)
雅思寫作連接詞之承：
Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to…;Furthermore/what is more/moreover;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result
雅思寫作連接詞之轉(zhuǎn)：
But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike…. ,A…;Different from… , A….;In fact/ as a matter of fact,
雅思寫作連接詞之合：
Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that…., we can come to the conclusion that…
另附雅思大作文考官范文示例
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
構(gòu)思過程：
獨(dú)居，也就是一個(gè)人生活，顯然有利有弊，如果選擇一邊倒觀點(diǎn)顯然都站不住腳，很難論證，需要分開討論平均用力。主體段一段寫好處，一段寫壞處。抽象類話題往往在尋找觀點(diǎn)上比較困難或者沒有方向，建議大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分類提取觀點(diǎn)。本篇考官分別從個(gè)人和經(jīng)濟(jì)的角度出發(fā)，層次分明論證清晰，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。
Introduction
1)背景導(dǎo)入，說尤其在發(fā)達(dá)國家的大城市，最近幾年獨(dú)居變得更為常見。
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：It adj. for sb. to do sth. 后置狀語補(bǔ)充，注意完成時(shí)has become;注意particularly的用法，舉特例方便直接，類似especially但語氣更強(qiáng); in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修飾normal代入感強(qiáng))
2)觀點(diǎn)句，我認(rèn)為這個(gè)趨勢的影響好壞各半。
In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：簡單句 后置狀語;虛擬語氣could have;consequences高分詞;in equal measure高分搭配)
Main Paragraphs 1
1)段首概括，一個(gè)人住在個(gè)人和宏觀經(jīng)濟(jì)上都有好處。
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：被動(dòng) 后置狀語并列;主語the rise in one-person households替換more people choose to live alone，地道高分搭配準(zhǔn)確;seen as語法得分點(diǎn);personal & broader economic詞匯得分點(diǎn))
2)分論點(diǎn)1：個(gè)人層面上，獨(dú)居的人可能變得比和家人一起住的人更獨(dú)立自強(qiáng)(常見觀點(diǎn))
On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：前置狀語 主語who從句 謂語比較級 賓語who從句，高分復(fù)合句;self-reliant高分詞，展示詞匯量)
3)舉例論證 線性推理展開：獨(dú)居年輕人需要學(xué)做飯，做家務(wù)，付賬單，管賬等重要的生活技能;這樣的人增加了就是種正面的發(fā)展
A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：主語從句 插入語 不定式并列 賓語all of which從句;簡單分句 被動(dòng);valuable得分詞;an increase語法得分點(diǎn);such individuals指代準(zhǔn)確，語法和詞匯得分點(diǎn))
4)分論點(diǎn)2：經(jīng)濟(jì)角度上看，獨(dú)居的趨勢會(huì)導(dǎo)致住房需求增加(加分觀點(diǎn))
From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result ingreater demand for housing.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：前置狀語 后置定語 簡單句;trend towards living搭配準(zhǔn)確，詞匯和語法得分點(diǎn);result in學(xué)術(shù)搭配，詞匯得分點(diǎn);demand for housing詞匯得分點(diǎn))
5) 舉例說明展開：這樣會(huì)讓建筑公司，房產(chǎn)中介和其它依賴業(yè)主購買產(chǎn)品的公司獲益。
This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：簡單句 賓語并列 賓語that從句;likely to benefit學(xué)術(shù)搭配，詞匯得分點(diǎn);construction industry & estate agents展示詞匯量;rely on homeowners詞匯得分點(diǎn))
Main Paragraph 2
1)段首概括：上述個(gè)人和經(jīng)濟(jì)的論點(diǎn)可以反向考慮;(簡介易懂，掛鉤前文暗含對比，CC滿分技巧)
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：轉(zhuǎn)折 簡單句被動(dòng);given above非謂語修飾，語法得分點(diǎn);be considered from學(xué)術(shù)搭配，詞匯語法得分點(diǎn);the opposite angle詞匯得分點(diǎn))
2)分論點(diǎn)1：和獨(dú)立的好處相比，獨(dú)居的人會(huì)感覺孤獨(dú)、隔離和不安(常見觀點(diǎn))
Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：前置狀語 主語從句 賓語并列;rather than無痕跡對比，語法和CC得分點(diǎn);loneliness & isolation高分詞)
3)舉例對比 論證展開：他們錯(cuò)過了家人或室友提供的對話和支持，還要承擔(dān)過重的家庭賬單和職責(zé);這樣來說，這個(gè)趨勢就是負(fù)面的
They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
(句型結(jié)構(gòu)：簡單句并列 賓語從句 簡單分句;miss out on地道搭配;emotional support, daily conversation & flatmates詞匯加分點(diǎn);bear the weight of高分搭配，詞匯得分點(diǎn);a negative one指代準(zhǔn)確避免重復(fù)，語法得分點(diǎn))
4)分論點(diǎn)2：從經(jīng)濟(jì)角度來說，住房需求增加會(huì)推高房價(jià)和租金(加分觀點(diǎn))
Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.
(句式結(jié)構(gòu):前置狀語 簡單句;the financial point of view替換an economic perspective;likely to push up學(xué)術(shù)搭配;property prices & rents詞匯得分點(diǎn))
5)對比論證 說明展開：雖然讓企業(yè)獲益，但大眾包括獨(dú)居的人都要面臨更高的居住成本
While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
(句式結(jié)構(gòu)：讓步句 插入語補(bǔ)充 被動(dòng);be faced with地道搭配;rising living costs詞匯得分點(diǎn))
Conclusion
1)一句話總結(jié)：獨(dú)居增加對個(gè)人和經(jīng)濟(jì)影響有好有壞
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(句式結(jié)構(gòu)：總結(jié) 簡單句 賓補(bǔ);detrimental不利的，高分詞，beneficial & detrimental替換positive & negative;兩個(gè)on介詞短語并列，語法得分點(diǎn))
雅思大作文評分
TR: 兩面觀點(diǎn)完整回答問題，分論點(diǎn)詳實(shí)有深度，首尾段觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)到位，9分
CC: 全篇結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，整齊，行文連接通順，易于理解，沒有明顯模板痕跡，9分
LR: 詞匯非常多樣，同義替換到位，搭配地道準(zhǔn)確，9分
GA: 句型多變，復(fù)合句實(shí)用靈活，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，9分
(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)
考官經(jīng)典的雅思大作文4段13句模板，大家可以模仿哦，注意，這里所謂的模板，是指他所熟悉和擅長的一種行文結(jié)構(gòu)，而并非具體的模板句型。
