2018雅思寫作常見錯(cuò)誤實(shí)例分析 雙謂語與時(shí)態(tài)篇
確保一句中有且僅有一個(gè)謂語動詞
錯(cuò)例：It is unclear recycling can control pollution.
正解：It is unclear whether recycling can control pollution.
改錯(cuò)練習(xí)：
1. It is advertising makes us buy something impulsively.
2. There are two line charts show the unemployment rate fluctuates in China.
3. The percentage of families have one car increased greatly.
雅思寫作常見錯(cuò)誤之時(shí)態(tài)
中文中沒有時(shí)態(tài)的概念，這是我們在學(xué)習(xí)和掌握英語時(shí)態(tài)的天然障礙。對于一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)的合理使用實(shí)在是難煞了一堆烤鴨。
錯(cuò)例1：Itis obvious that comparing with its drawbacks， the rise of English as aglobal language can bring us a lot of benefits.
很明顯的是，相對于它的弊端，英語作為全球性語言的崛起會帶給我們更多的益處。(被動)
正解：Itis obvious that compared with itsdrawbacks， the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot ofbenefits.
錯(cuò)例2：Evidencesuggests that the poor are fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost.
證據(jù)表明窮人因?yàn)橘M(fèi)用的問題而不能得到治療。(進(jìn)行時(shí))
正解：Evidencesuggests that the poor are failing to seek medical treatment because of the cost.
錯(cuò)例3：Airpollution and other kinds of pollution become worse as a result of theincreasing traffic.
空氣污染和其他污染的惡化是交通流量加大的結(jié)果。
Become一般用完成時(shí)或進(jìn)行時(shí)
正解：Air pollution and other kinds of pollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic.
錯(cuò)例4：Alack of job opportunities restrict school leaver's independence， either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home.
缺乏工作機(jī)會限制了離校生的獨(dú)立性，迫使他們留在家里或者搬回家里住。
用將來時(shí)態(tài)，將會，表意愿
正解：Alack of job opportunities will restrict school leaver's independence， either forcing themto remain at home and forcing them to move back home.
改錯(cuò)練習(xí)：
1. The increasing violence showing in films or on television has sparked public outcry， and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence.
