雅思寫作大作文高分范文：城鄉(xiāng)差距問題

　　Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems may those differences cause? How to reduce this problem?

　　雅思寫作大作文思路講解：

　　題目解釋：城市和鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)的生活水平發(fā)展不均;問可能導致的問題 和 解決方案

　　開頭段：由于本題是報告類，因次開頭段只要引出話題并告訴考官將討論problems and solutions 即可。

　　雅思寫作參考：

　　The significant improvement in the standard of living in a country has sparked a major dispute in the

　　whole society. Some people argue that this only bring advantages for cities rather than rural areas.

　　Correspondingly, this issue poses a vast number of problems such as overpopulation, seriously damaged

　　environment, which can harm the people's lives. My writing will go into further analysis of the problems and introduce some instant measures to tackle them.

　　主體段1

　　開頭句：總體說明該情況可能帶來不好的影響。

　　關鍵詞句推薦：The imbalance between the standard of living in cities and that of countryside poses

　　a variety of possible painful repercussions.

　　分論點1：城鄉(xiāng)生活發(fā)展不均會導致農(nóng)村居民大量向城市聚集，給公共設施帶來負擔

　　關鍵詞句推薦：Firstly, it is clear that when the quality of life of city dwellers is improved, many people

　　in rural areas tend to move to the cities seeking better lives.

　　As a result, the cities would soon become too crowded with large number of people living in them，

　　and this would result in deterioration of many important services such as health, transport, education etc.

　　分論點2： 發(fā)展不均可能帶來不滿和動蕩

　　關鍵詞句推薦：that the standard of living in cities outpaces that in the countryside may give rise to the

　　discontent and social unrest.

　　主體段2

　　開頭句：總體說明可以采取一些措施。

　　Nevertheless, many initiatives could be adopted to effectively ameliorate the problem.

　　措施1： 政府可以采取有利的財政政策和投資計劃來發(fā)展農(nóng)村經(jīng)濟，進而提高生活水平。

　　關鍵詞句推薦：A favorable policy and an investment program should be implemented in rural areas to foster

　　the local economy and thus living standard.

　　措施2：政府也可以將力氣花在直接提高農(nóng)村基建上。

　　關鍵詞句推薦：Another more direct measure can be upgrading infrastructure in the countryside such as

　　electricity system, amusement centers, schools, medical clinics.

　　結尾段：重申可能的問題和方案

　　雅思寫作大作文范文：

　　Differences, on the bright side, enrich the variety of the world. However, differences, in this case originated from policy partiality and regional imbalance, are discouraging: only urban areas are blessed with living standard improvements. In contrast, less developed areas suffer from such problems as an influx of population, weakening agriculture, and less care for the young and old.

　　To begin with, problems loom large when a huge rural population migrates into cities. The sudden increase of city dwellers instantly translates into congested traffic, job competition, a rise in daily expenditure, and more polluted environment. To decrease the burden of cities, higher entrance standards are to be set so that unreasonable migration can be curbed to some degree, for example increasing property price and raising job qualifications.

　　Subsequently, with population, labour force in particular, staying in cities, agriculture suffers. Farming is still a generally labour-intensive industry in the world. Thus, less labour force means agricultural instability, and national instability in the bigger picture. Withlurking food shortage, governments are compelled to enact favourable policies towards agricultural production as in subsidies in produce price and investment in modern farming technologies.

　　Moreover, when farming lands are abandoned, family members are left behind. It is not likely for migrating rural citizens to bring to cities their less socially competitive family members, i.e. the elderly and the young. With a huge age difference present, either the old or the young can barely take care of the other. In this case, governments will have to step in again to set up nurseries, schools, and retirement homes to accommodate the less-cared-for rural population.

　　In sum, negative situations resulted in regional differences are about waning agriculture, less care for children and senior citizens, and common urbanisation-related problems. Governmental control and adjustments, with policy and/or investment, are the cure.