雅思小作文解析及范文:男女就業(yè)率

　　Task：Information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 分段原則為：按照數(shù)據(jù)的共性和趨勢(shì)分段，eg. 男性均多于女性為一段;從1995到2005都增長(zhǎng)為一段。

　　2. 注意一類數(shù)據(jù)的描述(MAX，MIN，AVG)。

　　3. 舉例的時(shí)候注意描述改變量，eg. 美國(guó)女性的就業(yè)比例增長(zhǎng)了16%。

　　參考范文：

　　The bar chart shows changes in employment rates in six countries between 1995 and 2005, for men and women. Overall, more people were employed as the time went by, and the proportions of male employment were universally higher.

　　The first common ground is that women had lower employment rates in all countries at all times. For example, in 1995, the biggest difference between males (60%) and females (25%) was found in New Zealand, with 35%. Similarly, in 2000, this gap slowly decreased to 30%, still huge. UK had the closest rates between men and women, showing the difference of 4% in 1995, and of 10% in 2000, respectively.

　　The second trend indicates that in all countries shown, figures for both men and women improved. Specifically, in terms of male rates, Iceland owned the highest proportion and fast change from 70% (1995) to over 80% (2000). The biggest increase in male data went to UK by nearly 20%. In the level of female rates, the average increase rate was about 11%, and USA saw the sharpest rise by 16% over the decade.

　　In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed men had relatively higher employment rate throughout the period, and more and more people appear to be entering the labor market.

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