如何拯救你字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的雅思作文?

　　在雅思議論文寫(xiě)作中，通常建議大家遵循introduction- body-conclusion(引言段-主體段-結(jié)論段)的“三步曲”。Body(主體)段落提供了論證觀點(diǎn)的理由，是整個(gè)文章的主體，在評(píng)分中占有很大的比重。

　　例如9分雅思作文評(píng)分就要求：

　　presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas

　　如果你問(wèn)，什么叫fully extended / well supported?就是豐滿(mǎn)的主體段。

　　即使是5分作文，也要求：

　　is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

　　即同樣要主體段落豐滿(mǎn)才行。

　　一般來(lái)說(shuō)，想要雅思作文寫(xiě)的好，至少需要含有兩個(gè)主體段，且每個(gè)主體段都必須擁有明確的主題句即topic sentence，并有若干句supporting sentences，也就是我們常說(shuō)的論據(jù)與論點(diǎn)。建議大家在練習(xí)議論文寫(xiě)作時(shí)遵循幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的原則，就能夠迅速完成理由段，并且構(gòu)建連貫和理由充分的議論文哦!

　　Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.

　　簡(jiǎn)單的來(lái)說(shuō)，就是每一段，必!須!擁有一個(gè)明確的主題句，所有論據(jù)都圍繞這一句展開(kāi)，避免小段跑題。

　　Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.

　　支持句必須圍繞主題句展開(kāi)，烤鴨們一定要注意這一點(diǎn)，如果跑題，那么就會(huì)出現(xiàn)較為嚴(yán)重的扣分，那可真是哭都來(lái)不及啦!

　　例子看這里：

　　Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.

　　后面緊跟的First，second, third都是為了支持前面的第一句話(huà)。此外，在每一個(gè)點(diǎn)，又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面，又加了For example，來(lái)支持前面的觀點(diǎn)，這樣層層遞進(jìn)，文章就看起來(lái)格外的脈絡(luò)清晰。這句中，很明顯主題句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.

　　但本段也并非完美無(wú)瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school"與hobby重要的原因沒(méi)有關(guān)系，因此削弱了整個(gè)段落的連貫性與統(tǒng)一性，應(yīng)該被去掉。