雅思寫作語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：國(guó)家舉辦體育比賽的利弊

　　【政府類】：

　　The Olympic Game or the World Cup football game is a major international sporting event and the opportunity to host this event is keenly contested by many counties. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the Olympic Games? 奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)或者世界杯足球場(chǎng)是重要的國(guó)際體育比賽，很多國(guó)家都在爭(zhēng)取主辦國(guó)的機(jī)會(huì)，你認(rèn)為舉辦國(guó)際性體育比賽的利弊有哪些?

　　【相關(guān)提問(wèn)】：

　　Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?有人認(rèn)為訓(xùn)練專業(yè)的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)員比提供人人可以使用的體育設(shè)施更能幫助國(guó)家取得成功，你認(rèn)為這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是積極的還是消極的?(2014年7月10日雅思寫作)

　　【文章布局】：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

　　二段：利好的展開(kāi)：一定要有對(duì)于論據(jù)的細(xì)節(jié)拓展

　　三段：弊端的展開(kāi)：一定要有對(duì)于論據(jù)的細(xì)節(jié)拓展

　　尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + (對(duì)弊端提出解決建議)

　　【作家立場(chǎng)】：對(duì)于主辦國(guó)而言，舉辦國(guó)際性體育的利大于弊。

　　【思路拓展】 利好的展開(kāi)：

　　1. 健康角度：對(duì)于舉辦國(guó)而言，國(guó)際性體育比賽的主辦會(huì)激發(fā)全民健身熱情，提高國(guó)民基本素質(zhì)及健康指數(shù)。2008年北京成功舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)，就是很好的例證。

　　2. 教育角度：競(jìng)技體育比賽中傳遞的精神對(duì)于民眾有教育意義。例如，不斷自我超越、不懈追求完美、團(tuán)隊(duì)合作精神等。

　　3. 經(jīng)濟(jì)角度：對(duì)于舉辦國(guó)家而言，這是一個(gè)很好的盈利契機(jī)。例如，門票收入，紀(jì)念品銷售，旅游收入，贊助商收入等。

　　4. 文化交流：舉辦國(guó)際體育比賽可有助于文化的多元性以及增強(qiáng)各國(guó)的交流。

　　5. 心理角度：這是激發(fā)愛(ài)國(guó)熱情及增強(qiáng)民族的自豪感的契機(jī)。

　　【思路拓展】 弊端的展開(kāi)：

　　1. 經(jīng)濟(jì)角度：舉辦國(guó)際性體育塞事是奢侈的行為，我們有更加緊迫的民生問(wèn)題需要政府優(yōu)先考慮，因?yàn)橛邢薜馁Y源和無(wú)限的民生需求是矛盾的。

　　2. 環(huán)境角度：大量的游客的涌入會(huì)破壞當(dāng)?shù)氐淖匀画h(huán)境，這會(huì)給當(dāng)?shù)厝说纳顜?lái)煩惱，給主辦國(guó)帶來(lái)壓力。

　　【小鵬哥語(yǔ)料庫(kù)】

　?、僦С謬?guó)家舉辦體育比賽

　　1. to bid for the international sports events v申辦國(guó)際體育比賽

　　2. to host international sports competition v主辦國(guó)際性體育比賽

　　3. the host country n主辦國(guó)

　　4. has become a huge undertaking v成為偉大的事業(yè)

　　解析：undertaking n含有風(fēng)險(xiǎn)性的事業(yè)

　　5. to enhance the host country’s reputation in the international arena v提高一個(gè)國(guó)家在國(guó)際舞臺(tái)的美譽(yù)度。

　　解析：international arena n 國(guó)際舞臺(tái)

　　6. attract global interest and attention v 吸引了全球的興趣和關(guān)注

　　7. Stadium and gymnasiums could be utilized as hot tourism resources to achieve profitability, Qingdao Olympic Sailing Center is a good case in point. 室外運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)和室內(nèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)館可以被利用，作為熱門的旅游資源來(lái)賺錢，青島奧帆基地就是很好的例子。

　　解析：stadium n. 露天大型運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)

　　解析：gymnasiums n.健身房;體育館

　　8. An additional economic benefit is the possible profit generated by the sale of TV rights, accommodations, ticket sales and visitor expenditure. 另外的利好就是由電視轉(zhuǎn)播，食宿，門票銷售和旅游參觀帶來(lái)的利潤(rùn)。

　　詞匯：sponsor v.贊助;sponsorship n.贊助

　　9. Hosting the international sports events is a splendid opportunity to ease one’s patriotic emotion，strengthen one’s national pride and solidarity. 舉辦國(guó)際體育比賽是很好的契機(jī)緩解愛(ài)國(guó)情緒，以及增強(qiáng)民族自豪感和團(tuán)結(jié)。

　　解析：ease one’s patriotic emotion v緩解愛(ài)國(guó)情緒

　　解析：strengthen one’s national pride and solidarity v 增強(qiáng)民族自豪感和團(tuán)結(jié)

　　10. It can， to a large extent， kindle and stimulate the citizens’ passion of building up physique and thus enhance people’s health index and promote the basic quality of a nation’s population. 這可以很大程度上點(diǎn)燃和激發(fā)全民健身的熱情，因此，提高國(guó)民基本素質(zhì)及健康指數(shù)。

　?、?反對(duì)國(guó)家舉辦體育比賽：

　　1. Due the fact that preparations can be extremely time-consuming and energy-consuming，therefore，hosting international sports events sounds more of a huge waste of money and other resources to some people. 對(duì)于一些人而言，舉辦國(guó)際體育賽事聽(tīng)起來(lái)是金錢和其他資源的浪費(fèi)，事實(shí)上，準(zhǔn)備工作是非常消耗時(shí)間和精力的。

　　2. Inevitably, preparing the international athletic events will impose much pressure upon the host country economically while every nation has numerous social issues that need financial support from the public purse. 不可避免地，準(zhǔn)備國(guó)際體育比賽會(huì)給主辦國(guó)帶來(lái)很多經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力，而每一個(gè)國(guó)家都有需要政府支持的社會(huì)問(wèn)題有待解決。

　　3. Football hooligans or terrorists might deliberately make some sensational nuisance. 足球流氓和恐怖分子也許會(huì)故意制造一些聳人聽(tīng)聞的麻煩事。

　　【原創(chuàng)范文】：

　　{首段｝背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

　　The opportunity of biding for the international sports events is keenly contested by numerous countries. To host global sports events such as World Cup football game or the Olympic Game actually have become huge undertaking. People have been debating the pros and cons of becoming the host country without reaching definite agreement. This essay aims to prove that the merits of hosting international athletic events outweigh the potential downsides.

　　解析：The merits of hosting international athletic events outweigh the potential downsides 舉辦國(guó)際性體育賽事利大于弊。

　　{二段｝利好的展開(kāi)：

　　Indeed, many merits could be gained via holding international sports activities. One of the most positive aspects is that it will attract global interest and attention, thereby, it will become a golden chance for the host country to gain great amounts of foreign currency. Stadium and gymnasiums could be utilized as hot tourism resources to achieve profitability, Qingdao Olympic Sailing Center is a good case in point. Another merit deriving from hosting sports events is that sports competition could be a splendid opportunity to ease one’s patriotic emotion，strengthen one’s national pride and solidarity. All the people will pride themselves on their motherlands when seeing their players win the gold medal. Eventually, to host sports competition could kindle and stimulate the citizens’ passion in building up physique and thus enhance people’s health index and promote the basic quality of a nation’s population.

　　解析：All the people will pride themselves on their motherlands when seeing their players win the gold medal 當(dāng)看到本國(guó)選手獲得金牌的時(shí)候，所有人都會(huì)為祖國(guó)自豪。

　　{三段｝弊端的展開(kāi)：

　　Yet, the same knife cuts bread and fingers. On no account can we ignore the adverse impacts triggered by holding global athletic competition. For a start, preparing the international athletic events will inevitably impose much pressure upon the host country economically while every nation has numerous social issues that need financial support from the public purse. Even worse, a large proportion of tourists coming from home or abroad will unavoidably ruin the natural environment and thus bring a huge burden the host country.

　　解析：The same knife cuts bread and fingers 凡事皆有利弊。

　　解析：Every nation has numerous social issues that need financial support from the public purse. 每個(gè)國(guó)家都有很多社會(huì)問(wèn)題需要來(lái)自國(guó)庫(kù)的財(cái)政支持。

　　{尾段｝再次亮明觀點(diǎn)：

　　In brief, I re-affirm my conviction that although hosting international sports events might cause some problems，we can never underrate its immense advantages. What we can do is to budget carefully and strengthen efforts in terms of security and greenism.

　　解析：What we can do is to budget carefully and strengthen efforts in terms of security and greenism. 我們應(yīng)該做到的就是周密地制定預(yù)算，加強(qiáng)在安保和環(huán)保方面的努力。