雅思寫(xiě)作需要避免的十種開(kāi)頭

　　對(duì)于雅思寫(xiě)作而言，開(kāi)頭的重要性毋庸置疑，而實(shí)際上有幾類(lèi)雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭需要我們注意規(guī)避，為此小編特收集整理需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭，分享給大家，下面和小編一起來(lái)看看吧：

　　需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭一：中式英文 人見(jiàn)人暈(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　需規(guī)避雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭二：廢話(huà)連篇不知所云(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 直奔主題

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!