GRE作文范文 Argument-21

The following appeared in the annual report from the president of the National Brush Company.

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"In order to save money, we at the National Brush Company have decided to pay our employees for each brush they produce instead of for the time they spend producing brushes. We believe that this policy will lead to the production of more and better brushes, will allow us to reduce our staff size, and will enable the company factories to operate for fewer hours---resulting in savings on electricity and security costs. These changes will ensure that the best workers keep their jobs and that the company will earn a profit in the coming year."

In this argument, the president of the National Brush Company states that the company has decided to pay employees for each brush that they produce rather than for the time that they spend producing the brushes. The president states that this will lead to the production of more and better brushes, allowing the company to reduce its staff size and save money on electricity and security costs by operating the factories for fewer hours. The president also states that the changes will allow the company to keep the best workers and ensure a profit for the company in the coming year. In theory, the president's idea sounds good, but a closer examination reveals that his or her conclusions are based on nothing more than guesswork, not hard facts.

There is not really any argument here; the president merely states conclusions with no basis in fact. First of all, the president states that by paying employees by the brush produced, rather than for the time spent at work, the company will get better brushes in greater quantity. On the contrary, it is likely that paying employees by the brush will lead to lower quality rather than better quality brushes. The incentive will be for employees to produce as many brushes as they possibly can, thus they will try to work as fast as they can with little regard for quality. Although there will likely be an increase in the quantity of the brushes produced, it is likely that they will be of lower quality as the employees race to produce as many as possible. Without some type of quality control mechanism, the president's conclusion that there will be more, higher quality brushes is likely based on wishful thinking rather than fact.

Secondly, the president refers to saving money by reducing staff size and operating the factories for fewer hours. This does not follow any type of logical reasoning, certainly none that is present in the president's annual report. There is no evidence presented on which to base the assumption that there can be a reduction in staff. Additionally, employees will expect to work the same number of hours so that they may produce as many brushes as possible to maximize their incomes. It does not follow that there will be savings from staff reductions or from operating the factories fewer hours. Indeed, it is likely that the employees will be motivated to work longer hours to produce even more brushes, thus leading to increased rather than decreased factory hours. Furthermore, unless the company establishes a production ceiling for the number of brushes produced, there will likely be no savings in electricity or security costs as the factories will continue to stay open at least the same, if not more, hours than before the change.

Finally, the president states that the changes in policy will ensure that the "best" workers keep their jobs, and that the company will earn a profit in the coming year. Once again, these are baseless conclusions. Which workers will the company consider to be the best: those that produce the most brushes or those that produce the highest quality brushes? It would be dangerous to conclude that the best workers are those that produce the highest number of brushes, as a purely numerical merit system does not take quality into consideration. Such a system might actually lead to the dismissal of the best workers while keeping those whose only quality is that of speed, not of craftsmanship. Furthermore, there is no guarantee of profits for the company in the coming year with this new policy. Should the "pay by the brush" policy encourage employees to speed up production while sacrificing quality, it is likely that the company would lose sales and therefore profits. There is no evidence presented in the argument to back up the conclusion that the best workers will stay and profitability will be ensured.

To summarize, there is no evidence presented by the president that the plan will lead to the specified conclusions. Without further factual evidence that the plan will perform as advertised, the president appears to be engaging in wishful thinking rather than rational planning.

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參考譯文

下文摘自國(guó)家制刷公司總裁的年度報(bào)告。

為了省錢，我們國(guó)家制刷公司決定按每位雇員制刷數(shù)量計(jì)付工資，而不是按他們制刷所花的時(shí)間付酬。我們相信，這一政策將致使生產(chǎn)更多、更好的刷子，將使我們縮減工作人員，并將使公司的工廠工作時(shí)間縮減，其結(jié)果是節(jié)省用電和安全費(fèi)用。這些變化，將會(huì)保證那些最優(yōu)秀的工人繼續(xù)有工作，公司在來年將獲得利潤(rùn)

在這一論證中，國(guó)家制刷公司的總裁聲稱，公司決定按每位雇員制刷數(shù)量計(jì)付工資，而不是按他們制刷所花的時(shí)間付酬。總裁聲稱，這將致使生產(chǎn)更多更好的刷子，因工廠工作時(shí)間減少而裁減工作人員，節(jié)省電力和安全開支?？偛眠€說，這些變化將使公司擁有最優(yōu)秀的工人并保證公司在來年贏利。理論上，總裁的說法聽起來很好。但仔細(xì)審視，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，他/她的結(jié)論完全基于猜測(cè)，而非令人信服的事實(shí)。

其實(shí)，這位總裁根本沒有進(jìn)行論證。他/她僅僅提出了沒有事實(shí)根據(jù)的結(jié)論而已。首先，總裁聲稱，以制刷數(shù)量計(jì)付雇員工資而不是按工作時(shí)間付酬，公司將生產(chǎn)更多更好的刷子。相反，很可能計(jì)件付酬這一做法將導(dǎo)致低質(zhì)量的而非高質(zhì)量的刷子。這一刺激方式將促使雇員努力生產(chǎn)更多的刷子，因而他們會(huì)盡快地工作而忽視質(zhì)量。雖然很可能在制刷數(shù)量上會(huì)有增加，但是由于雇員競(jìng)相制造更多的刷子，很可能會(huì)致使質(zhì)量降低。在沒有質(zhì)量控制機(jī)制的情況下，總裁所謂將生產(chǎn)更多更好的刷子這一結(jié)論很可能是基于良好的愿望，而不是事實(shí)。

第二，總裁談到減少工作人員和減少工廠工作時(shí)間可以省錢。這一點(diǎn)也不符合任何形式的邏輯推理，更與總裁年度報(bào)告內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)。沒有證據(jù)證明有必要裁減工作人員。此外，雇員會(huì)希望工作同樣的時(shí)間，以便盡可能多地制造刷子，最大限度地增加收入。所以裁減工作人員和縮短工廠工作時(shí)間并不會(huì)省錢。的確，很可能雇員將被迫工作更長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間來生產(chǎn)更多的刷子，其結(jié)果是增加而不是減少工廠工作時(shí)間。進(jìn)而言之，除非公司確定一個(gè)制刷數(shù)量的最高限度，否則將不會(huì)在電力上有任何節(jié)約，也不會(huì)在安全費(fèi)用上有任何節(jié)約，因?yàn)楣S將比變革前工作更長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間，至少也是與變革前同樣的時(shí)間。

最后，總裁聲稱，政策的變革將會(huì)確保"最優(yōu)秀"的工人繼續(xù)擁有他們的工作，而且公司在來年將獲利。又一次，這些都是毫無(wú)根據(jù)的結(jié)論。什么樣的工人是公司認(rèn)為最優(yōu)秀的呢?生產(chǎn)最多刷子的工人呢，還是生產(chǎn)質(zhì)量最好的刷子的工人呢?說最優(yōu)秀的工人是那些制刷數(shù)量最多的，這將是非常危險(xiǎn)的，因?yàn)榧兇獾臄?shù)字評(píng)估體制沒有把質(zhì)量考慮進(jìn)去。這樣的體制實(shí)際上會(huì)導(dǎo)致最優(yōu)秀的工人遭淘汰而保留那些以速度為要素而不是以工藝為要素的工人。再者，實(shí)施這一新政策并不能保證公司在來年獲利。如果"計(jì)件工資制"的政策鼓勵(lì)雇員提高生產(chǎn)速度但犧牲質(zhì)量，那么很可能公司將蒙受銷售損失從而也蒙受利潤(rùn)損失。論證過程中并沒有提供證據(jù)來支持最優(yōu)秀的工人將被留在公司以及利潤(rùn)將獲得保證這一結(jié)論。

總之，總裁并沒有提供證據(jù)來證明這一計(jì)劃將產(chǎn)生他/她所標(biāo)榜的那些結(jié)果。因?yàn)闆]有進(jìn)一步的證據(jù)來證明計(jì)劃將會(huì)按所宣傳的那樣得到實(shí)施，所以總裁顯得在做一廂情愿的揣測(cè)，而不是在進(jìn)行理性的推論。