高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文:2015年湖南卷

2015年湖南卷

Directions: Write an English composition according to theinstructions given below.

請(qǐng)以老師當(dāng)眾表?yè)P(yáng)你為話(huà)題，用下面所給的句子開(kāi)頭，續(xù)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

    As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

注意：

1. 將所有句子寫(xiě)在答題卡上；     2. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；

3. 不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

[寫(xiě)作提示]

    1．本題為開(kāi)放類(lèi)作文，主題為“當(dāng)眾受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)”。寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)主要采用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

    2．寫(xiě)作步驟：

    (1)續(xù)寫(xiě)一件當(dāng)眾受到老師表?yè)P(yáng)的經(jīng)歷；    (2)總結(jié)這次經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生的影響。

【滿(mǎn)分作文】

Asa student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by myteacher before my classmates．Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year．

Ifelt extremely nervous the instant the class began．The reason was that the newEnglish teacher Mr.Zhang might announce the exam result and that I wouldprobably get scolded as before．Surprisingly，when entering the classroom，he glanced at us，saying gently，“Today，I won’t talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you LiJia wrote an excellent English article in the exam．I do hope he will make moreprogress with great efforts．”O(jiān)n hearing what he said，I couldn’t hold back my tears．It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates．From then on，I fell in love with English．You can’t imagine howgrateful I am to Mr.Zhang．Without his praise．I couldn’t have gone so far in my English study．

作為一名學(xué)生，我可以告訴你，沒(méi)有什么比在同學(xué)面前被老師表?yè)P(yáng)更好的了。我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記去年在英語(yǔ)課上的一次經(jīng)歷。

上課一開(kāi)始，我就感到極度緊張。原因是新來(lái)的英語(yǔ)老師張老師可能會(huì)宣布考試結(jié)果，我可能會(huì)像以前一樣被罵。出乎意料的是，當(dāng)他走進(jìn)教室時(shí)，他看了我們一眼，溫和地說(shuō):“今天，我不談?wù)摽荚嚦煽?jī)，但我很興奮地告訴你們，李佳的英語(yǔ)作文在考試中寫(xiě)得很好?！蔽蚁Ｍㄟ^(guò)努力能取得更大的進(jìn)步?！甭?tīng)了他的話(huà)，我忍不住流下了眼淚。這是我第一次在同學(xué)面前受到表?yè)P(yáng)。從那時(shí)起，我愛(ài)上了英語(yǔ)。你無(wú)法想象我是多么感激張先生。沒(méi)有他的贊美。我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)不可能走得那么遠(yuǎn)。