話題十七：觀點(diǎn)論證 Writing 1 高考英語(yǔ)高分范文3

Writing 1 　You are living in the Rose Residential Area，which is newly-built and not very large．At the back of the residential area is a large piece of empty space．People living here are always giving their ideas about how to use it．Now talk about your idea about how to use the empty space and give the reasons．

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I am now living in the Rose Residential Area，at the back of which is a large piece of empty space．From my perspective，so large is the empty space there should be a beautiful garden with colorful and pretty flowers around which are rows of big tall trees that can provide us with shades．On one side of the garden stands the fitness center．All the advanced sports facilities are available to all the people living in the neighborhood with member cards．Meanwhile，on the other side of the garden there should be a recreation center in which people can sing songs，hold parties and play all kinds of games in pursuit of entertainment．People can seek for whatever they want in the empty space according to the design．

The design，as I believe，is very understandable．First and foremost，a good natural environment is of great benefits to people's health．As can be seen in the picture of the neighborhood，there are only a few trees and almost no flowers，so it is absolutely necessary to build a beautiful garden with plenty of trees and flowers to provide us with a good environment．In the second place，there is a growing tendency for people to exercise after days of work in front of their computers．The fitness center can meet their demands well．Last but not least，entertainment is no doubt a necessity since more and more people are under pressure．Through all kinds of activities in the recreation center，they can relieve their psychological pressure and refresh themselves，thus contributing to their excellent performance in work and study seeing so many advantages．I'm convinced that everyone can benefit more or less from the new-designed empty space．