Writing 1 以“我居住的小區(qū)”為主題寫一篇作文,包括:描述你所居住的小區(qū)的設施及環(huán)境;你對居住的小區(qū)未來可能帶來的變化或管理模式提出一些建議。
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I live in the same neighborhood since I was born,which has a history of nearly twenty years.I'm so familiar with it that I'd like to give you a vivid and detailed introduction.
On stepping into the neighborhood,you'll be greeted with two rows of tall trees,reaching up to the sky and providing shade for the residents.At the end of the path stands a fascinating garden with various flowers blooming all year round.Next to it,there is some simple equipment for exercising,which is welcome by the old.What's more,they can also spend their spare time playing cards and chatting in the Card Room in the neighborhood,which is not far from the garden.I find most residents content with the equipment the neighborhood provides.
However,to make our life more enjoyable,some practical suggestions should be put forward as far as I'm concerned.Firstly,more cleaners should be employed in autumn,when the path is covered with a thick layer of fallen leaves,setting obstacles to our daily life.Secondly,new exercising equipment is needed to replace the old one since it is so worn that it may bring potential danger to the residents.Last but not least,certain people are needed to maintain the order in the Card Room,discouraging people from smoking and littering on the ground,so as to build up a more pleasant environment.
With our joint efforts,I'm sure that the environment will be further improved,thus making the neighborhood a more pleasant home for all of us.