Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:
Suppose you are going to graduate from your college in a few days, and your class is holding a party to celebrate the graduation. You are supposed to address your celebration speech to show your gratitude toward your teachers and classmates and share your plans for the future with them.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)情景內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)述畢業(yè)致辭內(nèi)容。
2. 情景解讀：假設(shè)你即將在畢業(yè)聚會(huì)上發(fā)表畢業(yè)致辭，你將如何感謝你的老師和同學(xué)，并分享你未來(lái)的計(jì)劃？
3. 文章立意：沒有老師和同學(xué)的無(wú)私幫助，就沒有現(xiàn)在的自己，也沒有機(jī)會(huì)站在臺(tái)上發(fā)表畢業(yè)致辭，所以衷心感謝老師的教育和同學(xué)的陪伴，同時(shí)分享自己打算出國(guó)深造的計(jì)劃。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)自己發(fā)表畢業(yè)致辭的榮幸之情，并提出情景內(nèi)容。
2. 第二段為致謝：對(duì)老師和同學(xué)的付出一一表示感謝。
3. 第三段為計(jì)劃：分享自己打算出國(guó)深造的計(jì)劃。
參考范文
Good afternoon, my dear teachers and classmates. Today, I feel honored to have such a precious opportunity to deliver a graduation speech here on behalf of the graduates. 1 Looking back the past four years, I clearly understand that it is the teachers, classmates and friends who make me what I am now. Without your unselfish support, I would not be here today. 2
Therefore, I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you, my respected and beloved teachers and faculty members. 3 You have provided us with an excellent education which has helped us achieve academic success. I also want to say thanks to my dearest classmates here for sharing happiness and sorrow with me. 3 Thank you all for making my college life so wonderful and meaningful.
It’s time to say goodbye although I am reluctant to do so. 4 But we have to keep moving forward to meet new challenges in our lifetime. Some of us will continue our studies at the post-graduate level. 4 Others will rush to apply their skills to a professional career. 4 As for me, I plan to study abroad to expand my knowledge. 4 No matter where you go and what you do, I wish you good luck.
Congratulations and thank you all. 5
親愛的老師、同學(xué)們，大家下午好！今天我感到很榮幸，能獲得如此寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)在這里代表所有的畢業(yè)生發(fā)表畢業(yè)致辭?；厥走^(guò)去的四年，我清楚地知道，是老師、同學(xué)以及所有的朋友成就了今天的我。沒有你們無(wú)私的幫助，我今天是不會(huì)站在這里的。
為此，我一定要向大家致以我最真誠(chéng)的感謝。感謝我敬愛的老師和全體教職員工，你們提供了優(yōu)質(zhì)的教育才使得我們?nèi)〉昧巳缃竦膶W(xué)術(shù)成就。我同樣也要感謝我親愛的同學(xué)們，是你們與我一起分享快樂與悲傷。感謝在座所有的人，是你們使我的大學(xué)生活變得豐富多彩且有意義。
到了該說(shuō)再見的時(shí)候了，盡管非常不愿意這樣做。但是我們不得不繼續(xù)前進(jìn)，迎接我們生命中的新挑戰(zhàn)。我們中一些人會(huì)繼續(xù)攻讀研究生學(xué)位，另一些人會(huì)迫不及待地要開始職業(yè)生涯施展自己的本領(lǐng)。至于我，我打算出國(guó)深造，增長(zhǎng)學(xué)識(shí)。無(wú)論你們?nèi)ハ蚝畏揭只蚴亲鍪裁?，我都祝你們好運(yùn)。
祝賀大家，感謝大家。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 致辭以表達(dá)榮幸之情開場(chǎng)。
2. 自然過(guò)渡，引出對(duì)老師、同學(xué)的感激之情，緊扣作文話題。
3. 先老師后同學(xué)，分層次表達(dá)自己的感謝。
4. 段落之間連貫自如，從對(duì)師生的感激自然過(guò)渡到對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。
5. 末段感情升華，達(dá)到烘托氣氛的效果。
要點(diǎn)用法
feel honored to 感到榮幸
on behalf of 代表
gratitude n. 感謝
respected adj. 可敬的
beloved adj. 可愛的
provide…with… 為……提供……
academic adj. 學(xué)術(shù)的
post-graduate 研究生
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. Looking back the past four years, I clearly understand that it is the teachers, classmates and friends who make me what I am now.
這句話中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)，其中l(wèi)ooking back動(dòng)作的主語(yǔ)跟主句的主語(yǔ)一致。
2. Without your unselfish support, I would not be here today.
這句話中使用了無(wú)if 的虛擬語(yǔ)氣結(jié)構(gòu)，“Without your unselfish support”是與事實(shí)相反的條件。
