六級(jí)高分作文_困惑越多，收獲越多

　困惑越多，收獲越多

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then explain how you understand it . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)漫畫的內(nèi)容就“知識(shí)越多，困惑越多”這一話題進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)述，并闡述“困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多”的觀點(diǎn)。

2. 漫畫解讀：一個(gè)人正捧著一本書，認(rèn)真地閱讀著。在他的腳下，是一段由問號(hào)搭建起來的階梯。圖片說明文字為：困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多。

3. 文章立意：知識(shí)是無限的。在社會(huì)的進(jìn)步中，隨時(shí)都會(huì)產(chǎn)生新知識(shí)、新技術(shù)，同時(shí)也會(huì)遇到新知識(shí)帶來的困惑。因此，我們不能因?yàn)槔Щ蟮漠a(chǎn)生就停止追求知識(shí)的腳步。相反，困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫及注解文字。

2. 第二段就圖畫內(nèi)容提出個(gè)人論點(diǎn)：困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多。

3. 第三段圍繞觀點(diǎn)展開論述。

參考范文

As depicted in the picture, a man is absorbed in reading a thick book while climbing long stairs composed of question marks under his feet. In addition, the caption below says, “The more doubts you get, the more knowledge you gain.” 1

From my perspective, the message implied in the picture is that it is knowledge that equips us with power to doubt the world, during which we resolve doubts and then gain more knowledge. 2 Simply put, the more doubts we have, the more knowledge we gain. 3

Knowledge is infinite, which inspires generations of people to study. Therefore, study is one of the most commonplace things in the world, especially in such an internationally communicative and competitive era. The development and advancement of society gives rise to abundant new knowledge and technologies that we may not understand. However, humans never stop exploring new fields just because of the appearance of new knowledge. Therefore, knowledgeable and competent people always learn how to study deeply in the field in which he will be involved and thus make progress and achieve great success. 4

如圖所示，一個(gè)人一邊全神貫注地閱讀一本厚書，一邊在爬由很多問號(hào)組成的長(zhǎng)樓梯。此外，圖片下方的說明文字寫道：“困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多?！?/p>

依我之見，圖中暗含的信息是，知識(shí)賦予我們質(zhì)疑世界的能力，在質(zhì)疑的過程中我們解決問題，然后獲得更多的知識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)單地說，我們的困惑越多，我們獲取的知識(shí)也會(huì)越多。

知識(shí)是無窮盡的，這也激勵(lì)著世世代代的人們?nèi)W(xué)習(xí)。因此，學(xué)習(xí)是世界上最平凡的事情之一，尤其是在當(dāng)今這個(gè)交流和競(jìng)爭(zhēng)趨于國際化的時(shí)代。社會(huì)的發(fā)展和進(jìn)步使得大量我們可能不了解的知識(shí)和技術(shù)涌現(xiàn)而出。然而，人們不會(huì)因?yàn)樾轮R(shí)的出爐而停下探索新領(lǐng)域的腳步。因此，有知識(shí)和有能力的人通常會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)如何在他將涉及的領(lǐng)域進(jìn)行深度的學(xué)習(xí)并借此進(jìn)步，做出偉大的成就。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 開篇簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片及文字的內(nèi)容。

2. 自然過渡，結(jié)合圖片及文字內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確傳達(dá)出這幅漫畫的寓意，緊扣作文話題。

3. 明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：困惑越多，收獲的知識(shí)越多。

4. 論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，論證有力。

要點(diǎn)用法

be absorbed in 專心于；全神貫注于

be composed of 由……組成

equip …with 用……裝備……

commonplace adj. 平凡的

competitive adj. 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的

era n. 時(shí)代；年代

abundant adj. 豐富的；大量的

knowledgeable adj. 知識(shí)淵博的

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. The more doubts you get, the more knowledge you gain.

此句使用了“the +比較級(jí)，the +比較級(jí)”的結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“越……就越……”。

2. Therefore, knowledgeable and competent people always learn how to study deeply in the field in which he will be involved and thus make progress and achieve great success.

此句用到了“介詞+ which”引導(dǎo)的定語從句，體現(xiàn)了句式的多樣化。