六級(jí)高分作文_感恩父母

　感恩父母

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on being grateful to our parents by commenting on the remark, “Love and appreciate your parents. We are often so busy growing up. We forget they are also growing old .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生對(duì)題目中引述的話“愛你的父母，感謝你的父母。我們常常只忙于成長，但我們忘記了他們也同樣在變老”進(jìn)行評(píng)論，就感恩父母這一話題展開論述。

2. 文章立意：父母是最愛我們的人，他們?yōu)榱撕⒆涌梢愿冻鲆磺小Ｒ虼宋覀円兄x父母。不能把忙碌作為借口而忽視對(duì)于父母的關(guān)愛和感謝。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡要就題目中給定的話語做出評(píng)論，引出論點(diǎn)：我們應(yīng)該愛并感謝父母。

2. 第二段論證父母是最愛我們的人：不論是遭遇困難、心情沮喪，還是成功失敗，父母永遠(yuǎn)都是在你身邊支持你的人。

3. 第三段闡述我們不應(yīng)忽略表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感激，表達(dá)對(duì)他們的關(guān)懷。

參考范文

“Love and appreciate your parents. We are often so busy growing up. We forget they are also growing old.” This means that our parents bring us up while we tend to neglect their growing old. 1 It reminds us that we should love and be grateful to our parents. 2

Parents love their children the most. 3 When we are confronted with difficulties, our parents always stand by us; when we feel down, they always cheer us up; when we make mistakes, they never hesitate to forgive us; when we succeed, they are always the first to celebrate and share our happiness; when we are in danger, our parents even risk their lives to save us. Our parents are always there with us when we need them. 4

However, many of us tend to forget expressing our gratitude to our parents. 5 We always give excuses that we are so busy. But remember, we grow up while our parents grow old. In my opinion, the best way to express gratitude to our parents is to show our true love and care to them. When you tell them about your life, they will be very happy and contented. 6

“愛你的父母，感謝你的父母。我們常常只忙著成長，但我們忘記了他們也同樣在變老?！边@意味著父母撫養(yǎng)我們的時(shí)候，我們往往忽視他們?cè)谧兝?。這句話提醒我們應(yīng)該愛父母，感恩于父母。

父母是最愛子女的人。當(dāng)我們遇到困難的時(shí)候，我們的父母一直是我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的后盾；當(dāng)我們失落的時(shí)候，他們總是使我們振作起來；當(dāng)我們犯錯(cuò)的時(shí)候，他們總是毫不猶豫地原諒我們；當(dāng)我們成功的時(shí)候，他們總是第一個(gè)慶祝并分享我們成功喜悅的人；當(dāng)我們遇到危難，他們甚至?xí)爸ｋU(xiǎn)來拯救我們。當(dāng)我們需要父母的時(shí)候，他們總是在我們身邊。

然而，我們中的許多人都容易忘記表達(dá)我們對(duì)父母的感激。我們總找理由說我們很忙。但請(qǐng)記住，我們長大的同時(shí)父母也變老了。依我看，對(duì)父母表達(dá)感激的最好方式就是表現(xiàn)出我們真摯的愛意，真正關(guān)心他們。當(dāng)你告訴他們你的生活，他們就會(huì)很高興，很知足。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 開篇簡要解釋題目引用的話語的含義，引出感恩父母這一話題。

2. 自然過渡，提出論點(diǎn)：應(yīng)該愛父母，感恩父母。

3. 第二段首句作為主題句，點(diǎn)明該段大意：父母是最愛我們的人。

4. 具體論述父母為孩子所付出的一切，為我們應(yīng)感恩父母埋下伏筆。

5. 筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，指出我們?cè)S多人容易忘記表達(dá)我們對(duì)父母的感激，引出本段感恩父母的主題。

6. 提出感恩父母的具體方式，結(jié)束全文。

要點(diǎn)用法

be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人

stand by 繼續(xù)支持

feel down 感到沮喪；情緒消沉

cheer sb. up 使某人振作起來

risk one’s life 冒生命的危險(xiǎn)

gratitude n. 感謝；感激

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. When we are confronted with difficulties, our parents always stand by us; when we feel down, they always cheer us up; when we make mistakes, they never hesitate to forgive us; when we succeed, they are always the first to celebrate and share our happiness; when we are in danger, our parents even risk their lives to save us.

采用排比句式論證父母是最愛我們的人，一氣呵成，增強(qiáng)了文章的氣勢(shì)，論證有力。

2. In my opinion, the best way to express gratitude to our parents is to show our true love and care to them.