Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing mistakes properly by commenting on the remark, “You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)題目的要求，從評(píng)論“當(dāng)你不急于否認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，就會(huì)從錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)到好東西”入手，就“如何正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤”這一話題進(jìn)行論述。
2. 文章立意：人無(wú)完人，任何人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)誤。人們對(duì)待錯(cuò)誤的方式不盡相同，應(yīng)正確對(duì)待錯(cuò)誤。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要解釋諺語(yǔ)的含義并提出問(wèn)題：應(yīng)如何正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤？
2. 第二段用列舉法論證，正確對(duì)待錯(cuò)誤首先要承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤：不要怨天尤人，也不要自怨自艾；承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤就是掃清前進(jìn)道路上的障礙，知道錯(cuò)誤在哪，便于更好地糾正錯(cuò)誤，爭(zhēng)取成功。
3. 第三段從另一方面論證如何正確對(duì)待錯(cuò)誤：向?qū)＜艺?qǐng)教，獲取寶貴建議。
參考范文
“You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them.” It’s true that to err is human. If we don’t deny mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. 1 However, many people are afraid of mistakes. How can we face mistakes properly? 2
The first step 3 is acknowledging the mistake that you have made.Admit that you have done something wrong rather than blame everyone and everything but yourself for a setback. Of course, you don’t need to condemn yourself as a failure. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake. Acknowledging your mistake is to reflect on how you made the mistake so as to make it more likely for you to correct yourself and succeed the next time.
Another way 3 to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far. If you have all ears to the advice, you’ll gain many valuable insights.
“當(dāng)你不急于否認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，就會(huì)從錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)到好東西?！钡拇_，人非圣賢，孰能無(wú)過(guò)。如果我們不否認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤，我們就會(huì)從中學(xué)到很多。然而，很多人害怕錯(cuò)誤。如何正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤呢？
第一步就是承認(rèn)你所犯的錯(cuò)誤。寧可承認(rèn)你做錯(cuò)了也不要怨天尤人。當(dāng)然，你也不用責(zé)備自己是個(gè)失敗者。認(rèn)識(shí)錯(cuò)誤能為你掃清進(jìn)步道路上的障礙，因?yàn)槟憧梢詮腻e(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤就是要反思你是如何犯下錯(cuò)誤的，以便你更有可能調(diào)整自己并在下次取得成功。
另一種正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤的方法就是向睿智且值得信賴的專家請(qǐng)教，這位專家愿意聽(tīng)你解釋到目前為止你已經(jīng)付出了哪些努力。如果你對(duì)這些忠告洗耳恭聽(tīng)，你會(huì)獲得很多有價(jià)值的深刻見(jiàn)解。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開篇引入引言并簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)述。
2. 話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，指出許多人害怕錯(cuò)誤，然后自然過(guò)渡，用疑問(wèn)句的方式引出本文要探討的問(wèn)題：如何正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤。
3. 分層論證，從兩個(gè)方面論證正確面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤的方式。
要點(diǎn)用法
To err is human. 人非圣賢，孰能無(wú)過(guò)
blame everyone and everything but oneself 怨天尤人
condemn v. 譴責(zé)
clear one’s way 掃清某人的道路
reflect on 反??；深思
trustworthy adj. 可靠的；可信賴的
have all ears 洗耳恭聽(tīng)
insight n. 深刻見(jiàn)解；洞察力
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake.
本句是復(fù)雜句，包含了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。除此之外，本句還用到了動(dòng)名詞，在句中作主語(yǔ)，使句式變化多樣。
2. Another way to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far.
本句也是復(fù)雜句，包含了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句who is wise, trustworthy...so far，該定語(yǔ)從句中使用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作介詞of的賓語(yǔ)，使得句式結(jié)構(gòu)變化多樣，行文流暢。
