英語六級命題作文：什么是幸福?
- 經(jīng)典范文
- 結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
What is Happiness?
In my opinion, happiness is to have a harmonious relationship with people in our lives. That is, he is truly happy who makes others happy.
There are some reasons for my view. First, it is the people in our lives who bring us the most happiness. Family, friends and co-workers, who are part of our inner circle, can share our experiences, hopes and dreams, successes and frustrations, joys and pains. Second, selfishness is a major block to happiness. To live life only for ourselves will bring us nothing but sadness and misery. Thus, the unconditional love we have for the people in our lives and their unconditional love for us is the essence of happiness.
In a word, I truly believe that the happiest people are those who get along well with others and love many things, keep a good mood in their lives. They have their own way to enjoy and appreciate the world. They love their children, family and friends. They love both sunrises and sunsets. The most important is that they know how to share all of these with others. (173 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段開篇用in my opinion引出話題，概述了作者對于幸福的理解。
第二段首句是該段的主題句，接著用first和second闡述了作者對于幸福涵義理解的理由。
第三段用in a word總結(jié)了作者對于幸福的認識。
什么是幸福?
在我看來，幸福就是在生活中與他人保持和諧的關(guān)系。也就是，真正幸福的是使他人幸福的人。
我的觀點理由有三：首先，正是我們生活中的那些人給我們帶來最多幸福時光。家人、朋友和同事形成了我們的內(nèi)部交流圈，能夠與我們分享經(jīng)歷、希望和夢想、成功與挫折、歡樂與痛苦。其次，自私是幸福的主要障礙。為自己而活，只能帶給我們悲傷和痛苦，除此之外什么也沒有。因此，我們和生活中那些人之間的無條件的愛就是幸福的本質(zhì)。
總之，最幸福的人是那些在生活中與他人和睦相處、心中有愛、保持好心情的人們，我對此深信不疑。他們擁有自己的方式來享受和欣賞世界。他們愛自己的孩子、家庭和朋友。他們既愛日出，也愛日落。最重要的一點是，他們知道如何將所有的這些與他人分享。
in my opinion 我認為，在我看來
harmonious adj. 和諧的
inner circle 核心集團
frustration n. 挫折
block n. 障礙物
nothing but 只有
misery n. 痛苦
unconditional adj. 無條件的
essence n. 實質(zhì)，精華
get along well with... 與......相處融洽
appreciate v. 欣賞，感激
share... with... 與......分享......
1. In my opinion, happiness is to have a harmonious relationship with people in our lives. 在我看來，幸福就是在生活中與他人保持和諧的關(guān)系。
2. To live life only for ourselves will bring us nothing but sadness and misery. 為自己而活，只能帶給我們悲傷和痛苦，除此之外什么也沒有。因此，我們和生活中那些人之間的無條件的愛就是幸福的本質(zhì)。
3. Thus, the unconditional love we have for the people in our lives and their unconditional love for us is the essence of happiness. 因此，我們和生活中那些人之間的無條件的愛就是幸福的本質(zhì)。
4. In a word, I truly believe that the happiest people are those who get along well with others and love many things, keep a good mood in their lives. 總之，最幸福的人是那些在生活中與他人和睦相處、心中有愛、保持好心情的人們，我對此深信不疑。
