Remote Education
When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, recently more people choose to receive remote education, especially for those white collars, college students and professionals.
In the eyes of those people studying through Internet, remote education has its own advantages which are beneficial to their study. In the first place, studying through Internet is more efficient and flexible because learners will not be bound up in the classroom at the required time. In the second place, they can listen to the lessons from the famous teachers who are uneasy to contact at campus.
But remote education is still far from perfection. On one hand, staying before computers too long will make students neglect the importance of communication. On the other hand, different from the traditional teaching methods, students find it more difficult to get feedback from their teachers on time.
As discussed above, it is obvious that remote education is a new teaching model without offices, classrooms and paper, and in my opinion it represents the trend of educational development and the most effective way to realize the popularity and justice of educational resource. (194 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段概述了遠(yuǎn)程教育蓬勃發(fā)展已經(jīng)被公眾廣泛接受的現(xiàn)狀,尤其受到白領(lǐng)、學(xué)生和專業(yè)人士的歡迎。
第二段闡述了遠(yuǎn)程教育的優(yōu)勢。首先,遠(yuǎn)程教育的模式更加的便捷和靈活。其次,人們可以聆聽到一些平時(shí)很少有機(jī)會(huì)接觸的著名教師的課程。
第三段論述了遠(yuǎn)程教育的不足之處。一方面,遠(yuǎn)程教育的模式容易使人們忽視人際關(guān)系的重要性。另一方面,學(xué)生不容易及時(shí)得到老師的反饋。
遠(yuǎn)程教育
當(dāng)面臨這樣的選擇時(shí):是在傳統(tǒng)的大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí),還是通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行自學(xué),最近更多的人選擇接受遠(yuǎn)程教育,尤其是對(duì)那些白領(lǐng)、大學(xué)生和專業(yè)人員來說。
在那些通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)的人眼中,遠(yuǎn)程教育在幫助他們學(xué)習(xí)方面有其自己的優(yōu)勢。首先,網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)更有效、更靈活,因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)者不必在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)緊緊地被束縛在教室。其次,他們可以聽到一些在校園不容易接觸到的名師的課。
但是遠(yuǎn)程教育還遠(yuǎn)不算完善。一方面,在電腦前待時(shí)間太長會(huì)使學(xué)生忽視溝通的重要性。另一方面,與傳統(tǒng)的教學(xué)方法不同,學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)從老師那里及時(shí)得到反饋更加困難。
如上所述,顯然遠(yuǎn)程教育是一種新穎的無辦公室,無教室和無紙化的教學(xué)模式,據(jù)我看來它代表著教育發(fā)展的趨勢,是實(shí)現(xiàn)教育資源的普及和公平的最有效途徑。
choose to 選擇
professional n. 專業(yè)人士
flexible adj. 靈活的
be bound up in 熱衷于
teaching method 教學(xué)方法
feedback n. 反饋
1. In the eyes of those people studying through Internet, remote education has its own advantages which are beneficial to their study. 在那些通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)的人眼中,遠(yuǎn)程教育在幫助他們學(xué)習(xí)方面有其自己的優(yōu)勢。
2. But remote education is still far from perfection.
但是遠(yuǎn)程教育還遠(yuǎn)不算完善。