Towards love and learning, college teachers and students hold controversial views.
The majority of college teachers, especially old teachers, argue that students should give up love and concentrate on learning. They say that campus love is time-and-energy-consuming and tears students away from their main task. If a student ever falls in love, he/she will undoubtedly neglect his/her studies and gradually lag behind his/her classmates. A few teachers, therefore, suggest that the university authorities restore the traditional regulation against love during students' school years .
On the contrary, students hold that it is natural for young people to fall in love on the campus because they meet every day and their everyday meeting produces romantic passion towards each other. They insist that the campus is not the Garden of Eden and love is not the Forbidden Tree. They take for example some of theirf riends who, falling in love, are studying harder and have made greater progress to please their boy/girl friends .
In my opinion, both views are lop-sided. If a student does not give himself/herself away in love but takes it as a drive, love produces positive effect. But if he/she indulges himself/ herself too deeply in love, then he/she will be a devoted lover but a frustrated learner.
CET6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析:
·Int roduction
* Two different views
· Teachers’argue
* Campus love — time and energy con suming
* Campus love — should be forbidden
· Students’argue
* Campus love — natural
* Campus love — promote learning
· Conclusion
* Both views lop-sided
* Depending on how to deal with it
CET6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析:
本文是一篇議論文。引言部分開宗明義提出師生對(duì)這一話題的爭(zhēng)議; 主體部分分別擺出兩種不同論點(diǎn)和論證, 結(jié)尾部分是作者的態(tài)度, 不偏不倚地加以評(píng)論。本文的命題和寫作是議論文的常見模式。
CET6六級(jí)作文萬(wàn)能句型:
controversial a. 有爭(zhēng)議的
tear...away from 使……離棄
lag behind 落后于
univer sity authorities 校方
restore traditional regulation 恢復(fù)傳統(tǒng)校規(guī)
students' school years 學(xué)生在學(xué)期間
romantic passion 浪漫的感情
Garden of Eden 伊甸園
Forbidden Tree 禁果
please v. 取悅于
lop-sided a. 片面的
drive n. 推動(dòng)
indulge oneself in 沉緬于
devoted a. 忠實(shí)的
frustrated a. 挫敗的