一、寫作思路
首段：提出當(dāng)前許多年輕人有一種不好的心態(tài)，遇到困難就容易退縮甚至放棄，并舉例說(shuō)明，比如學(xué)英語(yǔ)記單詞的例子，或是工作中遇到的具體困難。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：不好的心態(tài)+舉例說(shuō)明
中段：可以具體闡述如何做到不放棄，并舉例說(shuō)明。也可以分析不放棄的心態(tài)能給人帶來(lái)哪些好處，比如可以鍛煉人的意志，有利于增進(jìn)人際關(guān)系，也有助于最終取得成功。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：不管從哪個(gè)方面寫，都要舉例說(shuō)明。
末段：強(qiáng)調(diào)在追求目標(biāo)的過(guò)程中，永不放棄很重要。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：強(qiáng)調(diào)永不放棄的重要性。
二、參考范文和譯文
參考范文
Never Give Up
“Never give up” can be very encouraging words, but the majority of youngsters are likely to give up regardless when dealing with the ordinary difficulties of life. As one example, many young people are reluctant to continue their English study when they feel difficulty learning new words. But if one takes “never give up” as a motto, possibilities and opportunities are expanded.
It is true that giving up may make things temporarily easier, but what cannot be denied is that new opportunities arise from perseverance. Never giving up can expand one’s possibility for success. When confronted with something unknown, a little bravery can result in the possibility of success, like when Dr. Fleming discovered penicillin. Meanwhile, the sense of never giving up enhances one’s self-confidence. This makes one more likely to try new things, opening up even more new opportunities. It can even be a benefit to personal relationships.
In view of all factors, never giving up is crucial to the pursuit of dreams. Even though toils lie in the way, success is at the other end.
參考譯文
永不放棄
“永不放棄”是非常令人鼓舞的話，但是在面對(duì)生活中的日常困難時(shí)，大多數(shù)的年輕人可能會(huì)不顧一切地放棄。比如說(shuō)，許多年輕人在學(xué)新單詞遇到困難時(shí)，就不太愿意繼續(xù)學(xué)英語(yǔ)了。但如果一個(gè)人將“永不放棄”作為自己的座右銘，就會(huì)有更大的發(fā)展前途和更多機(jī)會(huì)。
沒(méi)錯(cuò)，放棄可能使事情暫時(shí)變得容易，但不可否認(rèn)的是，堅(jiān)持不懈就會(huì)有新的機(jī)會(huì)出現(xiàn)。永不放棄能增加人們成功的機(jī)會(huì)。在面對(duì)未知事物時(shí)，一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)勇氣就可能帶來(lái)成功，就像弗雷明教授發(fā)現(xiàn)青霉素一樣。與此同時(shí)，永不放棄的意識(shí)可以增強(qiáng)一個(gè)人的自信，讓人們更有可能嘗試新事物，開(kāi)啟更多的新機(jī)會(huì)，甚至有利于人際關(guān)系。
考慮到所有這些因素，永不放棄對(duì)于追求夢(mèng)想非常重要。盡管過(guò)程中會(huì)有艱辛，但成功就在彼岸。
